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Sleep Stirring Sun Warming Showers, Flowers Spring!

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Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/4/2009 2:29:00 PM

Beautifully expressed poem, it has everything. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/22/2009 9:26:00 PM

Very lovely indeed.. I can't wait to say goodbye to winter and hello to spring..Nicely done..Tyesha

Corinne Curcio

Date: 1/19/2009 8:10:00 AM

Can't wait till it gets here! Sweet :-)

Date: 1/18/2009 4:43:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration in this one. After below zero temps recently, I can't wait for the spring flowers. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing. Have a good week. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2009 1:33:00 AM

Lovely lanterne, dear Barbara. Love and peace, Lainie

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 1/17/2009 2:49:00 PM

in poetry sometimes,u say it best,when u say little in all.changes indeed!hapi nw yr.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/17/2009 1:17:00 AM

Thanks for supporting my contest Barbara.Rgds Brian

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/16/2009 4:40:00 PM

you must be in the deep deep south. south enough to speek spanish.. john

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/16/2009 3:41:00 PM

You captured it so well! Flowing with great sounds of alliteration. Excellent! Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/16/2009 3:40:00 PM

Dear Barbeeg Beeg, Yes the coming of spring I can't wait it was -16 when I got up this morning YOU are a superb POETESS Xliamp...HG Check Soup Mail later

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/16/2009 12:04:00 PM

Absolutely wonderful lanterne. I love the alliteration and also the thought of spring coming! Love, Robin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2009 10:31:00 AM

Barbara, you got me all excited with this write. Beautiful picture you painted with your words. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/16/2009 10:15:00 AM

Beautiful. It is freezing in Georgia so this has brought some well needed sunshine to me today. Thanks.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/16/2009 10:09:00 AM

Simply lovely....easy flow, a natural coming of spring. Love, Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/16/2009 10:07:00 AM

Love this style and you make it seem so easy. Terrific flow and imagery. Michael