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When I look into the mirror And stare at my own reflection I feel like a stranger sneering at me. I see the patch of dark around my eyes, With blotchy skin and wrinkles on my face. Once I was a bubbly girl, a chatter box, lost in dreams On fancy's wings, I soared high to touch the skies. Love vibrated every nerve and sinew. Now I feel like everything has changed, Making me wonder how rapid is the flight of time. Agile were my movements, could walk miles. Fatigue I never knew, supple limbs never ached. Then I felt like a triumphant victor. Now I see the stark change, years have brought, And wonder how rapid the onset of old age is. Though my beauty has burnt away, And my bones have a brittle grate, Still, I long to make life a sweet labor of love, And cling to it, waiting for each day, Looking hopeful on what the next day brings. Feb.9.2023 ~ Placed Second~ I Felt Like Poetry Contest Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Date: 2/22/2023 6:55:00 AM
- No one knows tomorrow ... beautifully written, Valsa - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending. Time/years march on. Have a blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserved contest win with this superb write.
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:29:00 AM
Beautiful write, Valsa. Everyone should look at life in this perspective. We must cling on to hope and always look forward to the next days ahead, God willing. Fantastic write as usual. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.. Charlie
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie for the contest, for selecting my poem for a win and the beautiful comment you have made.
Date: 2/20/2023 8:38:00 PM
"Looking hopeful on what the next day brings" - highly hope-filled words. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:50:00 PM
Universal sentiments of aging with grace never get old, great write! Congrats!
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Date: 2/10/2023 11:54:00 PM
Oh yes, time and age takes over life and strength quickly... Well written with an ending note of hope:)
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Date: 2/10/2023 10:38:00 AM
"Once I was a bubbly girl, a chatter box, lost in dreams On fancy's wings, I soared high to touch the skies. Love vibrated every nerve and sinew. Now I feel like everything has changed, Making me wonder how rapid is the flight of time." Superb poetry! Only my opinion...but...what you write (live, bring to surface from the deepest nature of your enchanting being) is, not only your legacy for humanity, but also the latent joy that will greet you, be your enlightened new spiritual/physical body for your next miracle journey. Blessings my friend. But I know nothing...dream the best as you do. I cannot imagine a heaven without solid substance, entirely alienated from the tactile joys we share here on earth.
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Date: 2/9/2023 8:03:00 PM
Here's my recommendation for looking in that dreaded mirror: Buy yourself a 'rear-view mirror.' You'll be looking great in no time! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 2/9/2023 1:21:00 PM
Accepting those we cannot change and changing those things we can then knowing the difference between the two is important in life. I think in the last stanza we see you know the difference between the two. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/9/2023 11:50:00 AM
The Spirit gives life; the flesh counts for nothing. The words I have spoken to you—they are full of the Spirit and life. John 6:63 NIV Bless you my friend: )
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Date: 2/9/2023 10:26:00 AM
Time changes way of life, as you convey so well in this poem, Valsa. Aging is difficult, but we make the best of it---I like the inspiration in the ending lines.
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Date: 2/9/2023 10:03:00 AM
Getting on in years certainly brings its challenges Vaksa, along with a few new aches and pains we amass a wealth of wisdom. Best of luck. Tom
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Date: 2/9/2023 9:13:00 AM
We are born to grow up. hopefully for a long time. But age leaves its marks. Lovely poem, dear Valsa.
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