Chance

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*Image of Cupped Mouse by Pixabay. Chance A game of cups where lies the cheese as senses vary sharp to dull tries our ability to perceive. Despite it all when all appears are not the same for when the witty find none neath theirs they are well pleased that hopes futurity but for the hopeless theirs hide the cheese their truth is realized what will be... will be. 2023 January 28

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/2/2023 10:03:00 AM

Perfect entry William. Life is a game, is it not? We search for the rules and find there are none. LOL I trust all is well with you today :) aloha Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/2/2023 10:15:00 AM

Life is certainly that my dear, Linda, chance affects throughout one’s lifetime and it’ll allow development of one’s lacking to be the wiser for a resolved future, mahalo for your concern for my wellness and astute share, Aloha William

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/1/2023 3:55:00 PM

And so, for some, the game continues on. Hello William :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2023 4:15:00 PM

Deception is never lax in defeat, but adapts, as a longer game will sharpen the targeted--granddad says, when it's game over, it never truly is..., and a fine hello to you, FJ, Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2023 9:42:00 AM

ha, hiding the cheese. Good luck to those mouses. haha

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/29/2023 9:49:00 AM

Those pesky rabbits with short ears, thanks for the uplift, Andrea, Aloha William

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/28/2023 12:17:00 PM

William, you write with a lot of wit and eloquence. Good luck with the contest!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/28/2023 12:31:00 PM

Thank you very kindly, Lasaad, it's what my granddad taught me about having more fun in life as I've mentioned to Michelle, thanks and Aloha William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/28/2023 12:01:00 PM

Very witty, I never had much luck with the games of cups :) Hope you have good luck in the contest!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/28/2023 12:28:00 PM

My granddad told me about the cup game, which is game over when found and the game is on when it's not, saying that the latter is more fun--'for my granddad', many thanks, Michelle, Aloha William