Cat

On tiptoe, I slink to the open door planning my escape. Just as I make my sprint for the outside, I am stopped and scolded for my brash attempt. Fates! Why must I be hapless captive by the vexing mistress of this dwelling? I wait until the night is sober black to claim revenge for her abuses against these natural instincts. A fallen vase will rouse her as she sleeps and in her daze I shall tangle around her feet and she shall sense my wrath!

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Constance La France

Date: 2/7/2023 3:50:00 PM

Linda, delightful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - C Words, well done, Constance

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/7/2023 7:16:00 PM

Oh so many thanks for your lovely contest and support Constance, and for my placement! Linda :)

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/6/2023 9:13:00 PM

First, thank you for the warm congratulatory remark to my poem. I now congratulate you for your BIG WIN! It's well deserved. Your cat story is clever as well as vindictively funny, and I also like the half-arrowhead shape of your poem, it's very artistic...ab

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/7/2023 7:26:00 AM

Hello ab. Nice of you to visit. Many thanks for the supportive words. I'm glad you like my little story. You should try the Ethereee form. It is fun to write. laf :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/6/2023 7:21:00 PM

great and superbly written about can; just great to read; congrats for 1st placement

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/7/2023 7:16:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit and kind words Mahtab. :)

Ann Peck

Date: 2/6/2023 10:29:00 AM

There is nothing like a cat to create havoc in one's life! But, their purr as they curl in your lap kind of makes up for it--and, they're not messy like my two dogs! A really cute poem, Linda. Congratulation on big win!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/6/2023 10:59:00 AM

Many thanks Ann. I'm a big animal lover and cats just melt my heart. :) Thanks for stopping by to comment!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/6/2023 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I enjoyed your "Cat"story. Have a blessed day..............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/6/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thank you sweet Paula! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2023 4:17:00 PM

This is an absolutely stunning piece, Linda. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on your win.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/6/2023 5:56:00 AM

Many thanks Lasaad. :)

Michael Tor

Date: 2/4/2023 6:55:00 PM

What a wonderful entry Linda love your theme. Thanks for sharing...

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/5/2023 5:54:00 AM

Hi Michael. I can't say how happy I am to have you visit with your kind comments. Thank you! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/4/2023 9:19:00 AM

What an imaginative poem. I'm sure this will rate high. Best for a win.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2023 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Victor. I appreciate your positive comments. hugs! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/4/2023 8:13:00 AM

WoW! Linda, This is good entry for contest. It reads like a personification as well. I’m sure it's how my Coco feels. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2023 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. I am so glad to see you here! I hope your weekend is going well. :)