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"Intransigence: characterized by refusal to compromise or to abandon an often extreme position or attitude : UNCOMPROMISING" - Merriam Webster No money had he to buy a new house to come up with a huge down payment, yet he refused to rent or to live with family as he was repeatedly advised. He borrowed the down payment money instead. Renting is for losers, he says, and "I always must live on my own." He sinks deeper and deeper in debt. His funds do not cover his living expenses, yet he simply won't do the appropriate things to better his situtation. He keeps all his dogs that are costing more money for trips to the vet and the food that they eat. He goes out and buys them Burger King treats - chicken nuggets. Those untrained dogs pee all over his carpet. He’d rather his house stink than give up one dog. Examples of his improvidence and intransigence abound. He’s sitting on gold and some silver - enough that would pay off a lot of his debts. But he tells us, oh no, I can’t cash that in. That’s for future emergencies (like when the world ends). A more bullheaded and sickly old man I never have met. He tells all the world he never will die, and I’m starting to believe it! July 20, 2019

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Date: 7/23/2019 8:46:00 AM
It's so common I believe...I can almost see eye to eye with him...I'll be a little cleaner though...Nice write...well observed too...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/23/2019 3:58:00 PM
oh please don't say you are like him!!! haha.
Date: 7/22/2019 5:33:00 PM
Some people are so intransigent...lol. Thanks Andrea, it's amazing how many ideas come from a one word prompt, thanks for your entry, and congrats on placing in my contest!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/23/2019 3:58:00 PM
yes, this person I know popped right into my mind when I saw that word and learned its definition.
Date: 7/21/2019 1:46:00 PM
If it weren't for bad luck......... But some of us make our own. Well done, good luck,
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Date: 7/21/2019 11:23:00 AM
Many Americans live like this. Up to their necks, drowning in debt. I say.we pray God helps them. I think Of Christ on the Cross who forgave all of us for our shortcomings. I have so many of my own! Many I have overcome. But am no SAINT. There are people with their money intact but no love of God. Good luck to them Panagiota.
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Date: 7/21/2019 6:55:00 AM
I have met some of the most stubborn four-year-olds in the world; I am picturing him as one of those. Nice one Andrea, and you have taught me a new word to use on some of my relatives behind their backs, in poetic form.
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:45:00 AM
What is it with elderly folk, they become so stubborn and don't listen to reason. Hope I don't go that way. Tom
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Date: 7/20/2019 9:13:00 PM
Is this a real person? What a character! As for my love life I have few possibilities. Hopefully one of them will work out. Next Saturday I may well be reading verse to a large crowd! Peace and love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/20/2019 7:27:00 PM
Where oh where did the inspiration for the write come from? You nailed the situation that provided such hefty material for this contest. I love 'like when the world ends'. It is hard to believe the fictional tone of facts sometimes, isn't it? You done good, dear heart. Love, CayCay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/20/2019 7:38:00 PM
Ha, like you have to ask!!! I could do another poem on someone else who lent money to the fool, but I better not go there!!!
Date: 7/20/2019 7:21:00 PM
there are some people that can never except that they are wrong....i love that he cares deeply for his animals, aside from that he sounds like he will part with the money when the world ends for him and only then...surely set in his ways! enjoyed this one my friend :) hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/20/2019 7:41:00 PM
He has a sweet side too. I will say that for him!
Date: 7/20/2019 6:09:00 PM
i'll try not to sound like a dylan tune so i'll just say...yaaaaa s_it happens
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Date: 7/20/2019 4:41:00 PM
I've heard of folk like this and sadly the mucky stuff will hit the fan when he does pass Andrea and its left to relatives to sort out the issues:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2019 3:57:00 PM
This is different from you, Andrea, i know of your caring heart, and the poetry is excellent, in so much as you write it as it is. Yes it is so many aspects especially regarding people, that makes the world revolve,,not all high brow and goodness, in fact reading it again, i feel it more, what you write and no doubt will when upon reading it once more.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/20/2019 6:42:00 PM
This person brought more stress to my life last year than you can ever imagine!

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