Busytown

BUSYTOWN Here lies an angel — a beautiful boy. Moments before, filled with angst, throwing toys. Sweet head on pillow. Honey breath billows. The busytown between storm and calm — joy. 4/26/2018 *busytown - made up word :)

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2018 10:38:00 PM

Precious and precocious. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 5:47:00 AM

He’s my youngest grandson! Just love him!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2018 10:37:00 PM

Precious and precocious. :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2018 8:51:00 PM

ahh, this is most precious, Kim!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2018 9:51:00 PM

Thanks so much! I love my little guy!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/27/2018 11:02:00 AM

The moments of a child sleeping are joy indeed - touching and sweet!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2018 7:56:00 PM

Thanks!

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/27/2018 10:14:00 AM

Clever work here. A new word! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2018 7:56:00 PM

Thanks!

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/27/2018 8:24:00 AM

And an interesting word it is, Kim. Children are a gift, Lovely poem xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2018 8:33:00 AM

Thanks, Mike! :):)

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/26/2018 9:19:00 PM

With the love, they can be a handful as well. Beautiful writing, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2018 10:04:00 PM

Thanks, Joe!