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Burnt Into Ash My Sad Soul Looks Far Back

Burnt Into Ash My Sad Soul Looks Far Back

In youth, my spirit was a climbing vine
dressed in green leaves upon white oak tree
Seeking light, I was walking a true line
in shade of path that was truly free

Storms weathered sheltering branches
bringing sun's hot beams upon my head
I sought more, took gravest of chances
of true love's blessing and being well fed

Once cast upon dirt and parched ground
my legs found needed strength to run
Racing winds sent that deceiving sound
soon, I forgot the heat of blazing sun

Burnt into ash my sad soul looks far back 
Long ago, in tree's top, I was once on track

Robert J. Lindley, 7-14-1999
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on POTD Robert! Excellent! Sorry this is so belated. Cheers, Connie ; )
Kalicharan Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Beautifully written! Sent me back some years. Congrats.
Dalei Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Your wise thought is well fabricated here, Mr Robert. I enjoyed every wording. A big congrats from me for POTD.............//:) hugs//Manmath.
Rt Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Oh, the times we do something without knowing why, and the times we go somewhere only to ask, "Why am I here?" Amazingly written sonnet
Read Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Ah, the things we do, and then look back and wonder why. Nicely written and makes me think...
Turner Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Robert, congratulations on POTD. for this bittersweet sonnet. It is my belief that all will be able to relate.
Ogundare Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 10:15 AM
A sad but beautiful sonnet
Manassian Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:55 AM
You are so adept at writing sonnets, Robert. Congrats on your POTD. Life goes through circles...sometimes we are strong and at other times weak. The spirit is what counts...Lovely write albeit sad. Hugs
Scars Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Congrats Robert on potd! Much deserved!! Lots of hugs :)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:45 AM
- Congratulations on your great sonnet - Enjoy your p.o.t.d., Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Quigley Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Great images and emotions.
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September 7, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Regret is like a rucksack you just can't take off, Robert. A fine Sonnet, nice to see it back in light of day. Regards, Viv
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