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find him on his back and think, he is a withered leaf so i pick him up from the porch but he buzzes, his whole body vibrating, it is quite wonderful really, so i know he is still alive, gentle, I place him on a pansy flower where he sips nectar, and he sips to my delight, but can he fly, his long legs feel and cling, so i place him in the shade of a leaf, and tell him to get some rest but first i admire his beauty, nature did that, when i come back to check, he is gone and that is true happiness, i weep because i saved a bee today.
little bee landing on my pansy for nectar butterfly came too _________________________ June 4, 2018 ________________________________ Added after contest judged- July 5, 2018 Poetry/Haibun/Bumblebee Copyright Protected, ID 18-1028-431-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Haibun Sponsor, Mick Talbot Second Place

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Date: 7/17/2018 1:38:00 PM
Creative and descriptive work. Way to go ..Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2018 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Such a beautiful write, tender and gentle. :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:29:00 PM
Great prose Constance, your haiku a shorter version of the latter save by the kigo, and a butterfly twist, congratulations on your 2nd place, Mick
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Date: 6/4/2018 12:23:00 PM
This is a sweet write, Constance. You are such a gentle soul:)
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Date: 6/4/2018 10:28:00 AM
Very sweet - a new form for me.
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Date: 6/4/2018 9:22:00 AM
Beautifully written BW
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:22:00 AM
Any life saved is a life enjoyed...as I have enjoyed your lovely poem BW...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:57:00 AM
written for the Haibun contest, sponsor Mick Talbot
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