Bullysoup

whopping bully
torments soupers fully
picks on others writes
although her writing bites

great big bully
eyes must be woolly
she attempts hurt
with words curt

Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 29, 2012
Contest - Clerihew 2

“poetry is freedom of expression. Soupers should feel free to share their innermost thoughts without fear of being persecuted. Nobody likes a bully. If you do not have something nice or constructive to say, don’t say it”.

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Date: 2/7/2012 6:49:00 AM
Belated congratulations to you on your win in P.D 's "Battle of the Cherihew # 2" contest Diana-Marie. I wish you many more wins in your writing career. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Diana-Marie! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:13:00 PM
I had thought they were all gone from our nice pages. Pay no mind. They're not worth worrying about. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2012 3:35:00 AM
Enjoyed this, missed the bully comments but well done for this. Congratulations
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:39:00 AM
Diana - Marie congrats on your win, I take it this is not about your mom ha ha ha, have a great weekend..David
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Date: 2/3/2012 9:51:00 PM
congrats Diana Marie on a grand win for this excellent expression.. no bullies allowed on PS.. report anyone who is unkind to u luv..
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Date: 2/3/2012 8:56:00 PM
DIANA~Congratulations! I had much much~ fun reading your Clerihew" thank you for your support ;-),pd
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Date: 2/1/2012 10:27:00 AM
for all the poet bullies; i'm sorry.
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The Situation
Date: 2/1/2012 10:29:00 AM
P.S. i'm sorry to all the poets i bullied out there in poetry land.
Date: 1/29/2012 8:33:00 PM
Some people are unable to distinguish between "constructive" criticism and "pejorative" criticism. A certain someone had all of her comments (none of them useful) expunged from here although her so-called "poetry" remains on this site for anyone to see. If you haven't seen it, you're not missing anything! Good write Diana-Marie.
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 1/29/2012 8:43:00 PM
I am happy to hear that her hurtful comments have been removed (hopefully for good) from this site. Thanks Robert:)
Date: 1/29/2012 12:33:00 PM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading yours Diana-Marie. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 1/29/2012 3:26:00 PM
thanks Carol:) Hope you are having a good night!
Date: 1/29/2012 11:25:00 AM
lyrical imaging runs in your blood, diane-marie.. oh, like mother; like daughter... powerful write that is distinctly scribed.. win, win!..:) huggs!
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 1/29/2012 11:27:00 AM
Thanks nette:)
Date: 1/29/2012 10:53:00 AM
Agree with you Diana-Marie:Hurtful words have no place here on soup!!!!(yes I know) SUPERT D-M. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 1/29/2012 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Arild. It needed to be said. Hope you are having a great day:)
Date: 1/29/2012 10:15:00 AM
LOVE IT< and I wish you could just say her name on the title. I think everyone has seen her around to know it!!! (hope this places FIRST place)
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 1/29/2012 10:27:00 AM
I wish so too. I think it is absolutely horrible that she feels she needs to bring people down. Insecurity springs to mind. Everytime we post something we become vulnerable to our audience. Hurtful words have no place here on the soup.
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