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I am a poet and writer of words, You know me through my sad poems; But there is more to me more to this girl, I found writing at a very young age. It is my life, This poetry, My safe harbour, Sorrow in words. I work in a nursing home for old folks, This job is emotional it breaks my heart; I do not want to love but I do love, And when death comes I am broken again. They are sweet, Well some are cross, There are stories, In wrinkled hands. I met death in childhood and we are friends, Sorrow has walked hand in hand each sad step; Death has taken everyone, even baby, Husband, sister, mother, father, grandma. In stone are names, And I grieve them, I write this pain, In sad poetry. But there is happiness in friends for life, We shop and dine, laugh and oh gosh we talk; I find tranquility in sweet meditation, The unconditional love of a sweet cat. In soft music, The birds in flight, In the silence, And I write, write. _________________________ April 9, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Broken Wings Copyright Protected, ID 04-660-836-09 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Bio Of A Poet, sponsor, Tammy Reams , Judged 05/2015 First Place

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Date: 9/19/2015 9:29:00 PM
Broken Wings: This is deeply moving, deeply affecting, deeply honest--a marvelous composition by even the most stringent standard. Thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 4/27/2015 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:13:00 AM
This is deep Broken, Congratulations on your "Bio of a Poet" WIN! Deep!! Linda
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:07:00 AM
This should always keep you strong, But there is happiness in friends for life, We shop and dine, laugh and oh gosh we talk; I find tranquility in sweet meditation, The unconditional love of a sweet cat. Congs on the win Broken wings #Bryan Loves, xxx
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:59:00 PM
Broken, congratulations on your 1st Place win for your beautiful bio poem. So nice to know more about you; the sadness in past, but also about the giving and loving work you do in the nursing home, as well as your spirituality, and the creative talent expressed through your poems. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:34:00 PM
Congrats, BW, on this great win! Hugs! :)
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 1:28:00 AM
Poignantly beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2015 11:26:00 PM
Very nicely written Broken, congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2015 10:46:00 PM
:)
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Date: 4/18/2015 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wing, a 7 and a fav. Your poems are sad but very beautiful, I truly enjoyed your Bio. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:49:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win Broken Wings. You do write sad poems but they are always fantastic writes. I love 'In the silence And I write'. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 4/10/2015 5:48:00 PM
"...there are stories in wrinkled hands..." such a poetic line tells of your selfless heart, BW...you did not just make this about you but about the people whom you take care of, too. glad there are nice friends and things that you occupy yourself with A 7.
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Date: 4/10/2015 5:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..This is a very personal one..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:05:00 AM
I love the hopeful within the sad. This is a moving and honest portrayal of self. I expect it will do very well.
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Date: 4/10/2015 1:43:00 AM
Yeah tough life Dere u see dear, great bio so well put up in words broken wings ! Gl in contest!
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Date: 4/9/2015 7:39:00 PM
Congrad's So glad to hear of the happier things Constance, I too worked in nursing homes in the past, not an easy job! Light & Love
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Date: 4/9/2015 2:47:00 PM
Sarojini Naidu, an Indian poetess once quoted God as saying in a poem, "Life is the prism of my light. Death the shadow of my face." Beautiful souls perceive this truth and your poetry is beautiful. Your 'broken wings' will take you high! God bless :)
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Date: 4/9/2015 11:08:00 AM
Such an emotional write brought tears to my eyes - i love the way you have structured this - when I visit mum in the care home people are so happy to sahre their life stories me - there ARE stories in wrinkled hands - they just need someone to listen! :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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