Notes About The Poem

Broken Wings



I am a poet and writer of words,
You know me through my sad poems;
But there is more to me more to this girl,
I found writing at a very young age.

    It is my life,
    This poetry,
    My safe harbour,
        Sorrow in words.

I work in a nursing home for old folks,
This job is emotional it breaks my heart;
I do not want to love but I do love,
And when death comes I am broken again.

    They are sweet,
    Well some are cross,
    There are stories,
        In wrinkled hands.

I met death in childhood and we are friends,
Sorrow has walked hand in hand each sad step;
Death has taken everyone, even baby,
Husband, sister, mother, father, grandma.

    In stone are names,
    And I grieve them,
    I write this pain,
        In sad poetry.

But there is happiness in friends for life,
We shop and dine, laugh and oh gosh we talk;  
I find tranquility in sweet meditation,
The unconditional love of a sweet cat.

    In soft music,
    The birds in flight,
    In the silence,
        And I write, write.


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April 9, 2015


Poetry/Verse/Broken Wings
Copyright Protected, ID 04-660-836-09
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France 


For the Standard contest, Bio Of A Poet, 
sponsor, Tammy Reams , Judged 05/2015

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Schneiter Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Broken Wings: This is deeply moving, deeply affecting, deeply honest--a marvelous composition by even the most stringent standard. Thank you for sharing it.
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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April 26, 2015 at 12:13 AM
This is deep Broken, Congratulations on your "Bio of a Poet" WIN! Deep!! Linda
Oule Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 12:07 AM
This should always keep you strong, But there is happiness in friends for life, We shop and dine, laugh and oh gosh we talk; I find tranquility in sweet meditation, The unconditional love of a sweet cat. Congs on the win Broken wings #Bryan Loves, xxx
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April 19, 2015 at 12:59 PM
Broken, congratulations on your 1st Place win for your beautiful bio poem. So nice to know more about you; the sadness in past, but also about the giving and loving work you do in the nursing home, as well as your spirituality, and the creative talent expressed through your poems. Hugs, Sandra
Nunez Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Congrats, BW, on this great win! Hugs! :)
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 6:41 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) Hugs Jan xx
Das Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Poignantly beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
Ebbs Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Very nicely written Broken, congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 10:46 PM
:)
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April 18, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wing, a 7 and a fav. Your poems are sad but very beautiful, I truly enjoyed your Bio. Blessings dear friend Eve
Reams Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 9:49 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win Broken Wings. You do write sad poems but they are always fantastic writes. I love 'In the silence And I write'. Thank you for entering my contest.
Nunez Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 5:48 PM
"...there are stories in wrinkled hands..." such a poetic line tells of your selfless heart, BW...you did not just make this about you but about the people whom you take care of, too. glad there are nice friends and things that you occupy yourself with A 7.
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..This is a very personal one..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 8:05 AM
I love the hopeful within the sad. This is a moving and honest portrayal of self. I expect it will do very well.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 1:43 AM
Yeah tough life Dere u see dear, great bio so well put up in words broken wings ! Gl in contest!
Guzzi Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Congrad's So glad to hear of the happier things Constance, I too worked in nursing homes in the past, not an easy job! Light & Love
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April 9, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Sarojini Naidu, an Indian poetess once quoted God as saying in a poem, "Life is the prism of my light. Death the shadow of my face." Beautiful souls perceive this truth and your poetry is beautiful. Your 'broken wings' will take you high! God bless :)
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Such an emotional write brought tears to my eyes - i love the way you have structured this - when I visit mum in the care home people are so happy to sahre their life stories me - there ARE stories in wrinkled hands - they just need someone to listen! :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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