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Broken- Hearted - Lonely Soul

I can't bare this pain and agony I wanted to love you forever Why was fate so cruel? I long to be with you I live between life and death I am a modern day zombie My heart is no more I can’t feel and I’m suffocating I’m drowning in an ocean of sorrow Without my love I can't go on Only being reunited with you in death can save my tortured soul 10-14-17 Inspired by the “Broken Hearted Poem” contest Sponsor: Broken Wings Fifth Place

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2017 8:58:00 AM

So very sad and heartbreaking, Alexis. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/17/2017 10:59:00 PM

Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Alexis - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)

Constance La France

Date: 10/17/2017 1:36:00 PM

Alexis, such a sad, sad write, congratulations on your win in my contest !

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/17/2017 1:40:00 PM

Hi BW, You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2017 9:31:00 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/16/2017 5:28:00 PM

Congrats Alexis--very emotional write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2017 4:35:00 PM

a very sad one, Alexis.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/16/2017 8:45:00 AM

Sad in its portrayal of brokenness, Alexis, well written:)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2017 5:52:00 AM

Such raw emotion Alexis I am sure many can relate to these words:-( hugs jan x

John Gondolf

Date: 10/14/2017 8:54:00 PM

Alexis, I can feel the sadness and loneliness, great write. Best of luck in the contest. John

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/14/2017 7:28:00 PM

Very sad, longing, poem, a beautiful write!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2017 7:24:00 PM

Wow Alexis, your poem is genuine, emotionally raw and compelling. Your last two lines are an effective emotive stunner. A fantastic write that I hope is more dramatic than real... Well done for making me feel your anguish. Hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/14/2017 6:19:00 PM

Modern zombies, nice expression helps the reader to feel the pain, the walking dead is how to describe the severely brokenhearted. Only those who have experienced this can truly understand, I felt the pain...well done!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/14/2017 2:53:00 PM

Awwww...this is so deep in anguish, Sweetie. I see it's for a contest. Good luck. Love can hurt and love can heal. Hugs