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This old sea-rig is swamped and don't float I TOLD you we'd need a bigger boat! Now you are HIS prize Sure ain't no surprise That you're fish-food, you hard-headed goat! "Jaws" - 1975

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Date: 4/10/2010 11:26:00 AM
LOL such wit! loved it...yes I love vinegar too all kinds though I was raised on apple cider vinegar...nothing better on a hot salty bowl of pan seared dandilion greens fryed with a piece of salt pork back GAH! but it was GOOD!
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:07:00 PM
Very entertaining!
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:56:00 AM
Classic... I haven't seen this film in ages....:JP]
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Date: 3/2/2010 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your place with this quite cheeky rhyme, well done...Margaret
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:51:00 PM
My dear Tim, I enjoyed this so much, 'Though it's not funny...it still is!!LOL My warm congratulations on this awesome Limerick! And thank you for reading my poems and enjoying them, too! (I needed a boost from a poet I admire) Thanks, Tim! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:50:00 AM
A good one in this fun contest. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:41:00 AM
Great double write that could be entered in two contest that have been going one by Carolyn and another that is about your favorite movie scene or character or actressor actors..Should be in the winner's cirlce. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and my daughter's ....We will do another some day..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on such a fine win. Déirdre
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:57:00 AM
congrats on the win!!
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:31:00 AM
Kool Limerick Tim , i am delighted for you in being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 3/1/2010 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Tim, a deserving win! LUv, Andrea (thanks for all your comments to me today)
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Date: 2/28/2010 11:36:00 PM
It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Tim, you swam to the top of the pond with your very hilarious 2rd place win in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:46:00 PM
Crafty piece and well deserved , Tim .....
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:41:00 PM
Nicely done. A keeper, Tim. I remember going to see this in 1975 in the theatre and I still think it's one of Spielbergs' five best films. Great performance by Shaw. Congratulations, REgards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:33:00 PM
Tim-I really got a kick out of that one. Congrats on your place in the contest. Charles Henderson
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:29:00 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:43:00 PM
Hey you are a WINNER!!!! yea! go fit win!!! Hurrah! Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:22:00 PM
Congrats Tim on your winning 2nd place in the Limerick contest .. a funny write and well deserved win..enjoy.. luv. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:09:00 PM
This was a fun contest..congrats on your win..it is hilarious. BG ( You old goat!)
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on placing second in my contest with this awesome poem, Tim!
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:54:00 PM
Such a cute limerick....and a perfectly winning poem! Congratulations, dear Tim....this win was well deserving!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:08:00 PM
GREAT job, and you used something from Jaws? I am not sure I remember that theme, but you DONE GOOD with it. Hey, did you ever make it to the bathroom? hahaha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/27/2010 12:42:00 PM
Ha, hahaha! ..."hard-headed goat!!... Great Limerick! I wish you luck in the contest, Tim! Peace, Audrey
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