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Brody and Quint

This old sea-rig is swamped and don't float I TOLD you we'd need a bigger boat! Now you are HIS prize Sure ain't no surprise That you're fish-food, you hard-headed goat! "Jaws" - 1975

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/10/2010 11:26:00 AM

LOL such wit! loved it...yes I love vinegar too all kinds though I was raised on apple cider vinegar...nothing better on a hot salty bowl of pan seared dandilion greens fryed with a piece of salt pork back GAH! but it was GOOD!

Susan Palli

Date: 3/3/2010 12:07:00 PM

Very entertaining!

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2010 8:56:00 AM

Classic... I haven't seen this film in ages....:JP]

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/2/2010 7:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your place with this quite cheeky rhyme, well done...Margaret

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Tim. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2010 8:51:00 PM

My dear Tim, I enjoyed this so much, 'Though it's not funny...it still is!!LOL My warm congratulations on this awesome Limerick! And thank you for reading my poems and enjoying them, too! (I needed a boost from a poet I admire) Thanks, Tim! Peace, Audrey

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/1/2010 10:50:00 AM

A good one in this fun contest. Congratulations. Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2010 6:41:00 AM

Great double write that could be entered in two contest that have been going one by Carolyn and another that is about your favorite movie scene or character or actressor actors..Should be in the winner's cirlce. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and my daughter's ....We will do another some day..Sara

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/1/2010 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations on such a fine win. Déirdre

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/1/2010 5:57:00 AM

congrats on the win!!

James Fraser

Date: 3/1/2010 3:31:00 AM

Kool Limerick Tim , i am delighted for you in being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 12:12:00 AM

Congratulations, Tim, a deserving win! LUv, Andrea (thanks for all your comments to me today)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/28/2010 11:36:00 PM

It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Tim, you swam to the top of the pond with your very hilarious 2rd place win in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/28/2010 10:46:00 PM

Crafty piece and well deserved , Tim .....

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/28/2010 9:41:00 PM

Nicely done. A keeper, Tim. I remember going to see this in 1975 in the theatre and I still think it's one of Spielbergs' five best films. Great performance by Shaw. Congratulations, REgards, Gerard.

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/28/2010 7:33:00 PM

Tim-I really got a kick out of that one. Congrats on your place in the contest. Charles Henderson

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/28/2010 7:29:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2010 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2010 6:43:00 PM

Hey you are a WINNER!!!! yea! go fit win!!! Hurrah! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 6:22:00 PM

Congrats Tim on your winning 2nd place in the Limerick contest .. a funny write and well deserved win..enjoy.. luv. "Sweetheart"

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/28/2010 6:09:00 PM

This was a fun contest..congrats on your win..it is hilarious. BG ( You old goat!)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 6:06:00 PM

Congratulations on placing second in my contest with this awesome poem, Tim!

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/28/2010 5:54:00 PM

Such a cute limerick....and a perfectly winning poem! Congratulations, dear Tim....this win was well deserving!! Love, Carrie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2010 5:08:00 PM

GREAT job, and you used something from Jaws? I am not sure I remember that theme, but you DONE GOOD with it. Hey, did you ever make it to the bathroom? hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/27/2010 12:42:00 PM

Ha, hahaha! ..."hard-headed goat!!... Great Limerick! I wish you luck in the contest, Tim! Peace, Audrey