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Brody and Quint

This old sea-rig is swamped and don't float
I TOLD you we'd need a bigger boat!
Now you are HIS prize
Sure ain't no surprise
That you're fish-food, you hard-headed goat!

"Jaws" - 1975

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/10/2010 11:26:00 AM LOL such wit! loved it...yes I love vinegar too all kinds though I was raised on apple cider vinegar...nothing better on a hot salty bowl of pan seared dandilion greens fryed with a piece of salt pork back GAH! but it was GOOD! Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 3/3/2010 12:07:00 PM Very entertaining! Login to Reply

Jared Pickett Date: 3/3/2010 8:56:00 AM Classic... I haven't seen this film in ages....:JP] Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 3/2/2010 7:54:00 PM Congratulations on your place with this quite cheeky rhyme, well done...Margaret Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/2/2010 10:44:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Tim. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 3/1/2010 8:51:00 PM My dear Tim, I enjoyed this so much, 'Though it's not funny...it still is!!LOL My warm congratulations on this awesome Limerick! And thank you for reading my poems and enjoying them, too! (I needed a boost from a poet I admire) Thanks, Tim! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 3/1/2010 10:50:00 AM A good one in this fun contest. Congratulations. Joyce Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/1/2010 6:41:00 AM Great double write that could be entered in two contest that have been going one by Carolyn and another that is about your favorite movie scene or character or actressor actors..Should be in the winner's cirlce. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and my daughter's ....We will do another some day..Sara Login to Reply

Deirdre Omaidin Date: 3/1/2010 6:10:00 AM Congratulations on such a fine win. Déirdre Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/1/2010 5:57:00 AM congrats on the win!! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/1/2010 3:31:00 AM Kool Limerick Tim , i am delighted for you in being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/1/2010 12:12:00 AM Congratulations, Tim, a deserving win! LUv, Andrea (thanks for all your comments to me today) Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 2/28/2010 11:36:00 PM It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Tim, you swam to the top of the pond with your very hilarious 2rd place win in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 2/28/2010 10:46:00 PM Crafty piece and well deserved , Tim ..... Login to Reply

Gerard Keogh Jr. Date: 2/28/2010 9:41:00 PM Nicely done. A keeper, Tim. I remember going to see this in 1975 in the theatre and I still think it's one of Spielbergs' five best films. Great performance by Shaw. Congratulations, REgards, Gerard. Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 2/28/2010 7:33:00 PM Tim-I really got a kick out of that one. Congrats on your place in the contest. Charles Henderson Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 2/28/2010 7:29:00 PM Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/28/2010 6:58:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Sincere, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/28/2010 6:43:00 PM Hey you are a WINNER!!!! yea! go fit win!!! Hurrah! Light & Love Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/28/2010 6:22:00 PM Congrats Tim on your winning 2nd place in the Limerick contest .. a funny write and well deserved win..enjoy.. luv. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 2/28/2010 6:09:00 PM This was a fun contest..congrats on your win..it is hilarious. BG ( You old goat!) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/28/2010 6:06:00 PM Congratulations on placing second in my contest with this awesome poem, Tim! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/28/2010 5:54:00 PM Such a cute limerick....and a perfectly winning poem! Congratulations, dear Tim....this win was well deserving!! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/28/2010 5:08:00 PM GREAT job, and you used something from Jaws? I am not sure I remember that theme, but you DONE GOOD with it. Hey, did you ever make it to the bathroom? hahaha. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/27/2010 12:42:00 PM Ha, hahaha! ..."hard-headed goat!!... Great Limerick! I wish you luck in the contest, Tim! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

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