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Brittany

___________________________________ =============================== ...at the edge of neverland where spring butterflies dance in dream a loving salutation rang through the valley as softy I sang.. a great gift had arrived with a breath of loving promise a tendril of life twirling and touching in search of loves nurture outstretched and reaching my girl of cherry blossom beauty opened her eyes of felicity with blue ocean innocence and topaz starlight in that precious moment of silence cathedral bells rang for a beautiful gift of gods grace was born an angel named "Brittany" =============================== ___________________________________ Contest ~ "My Children" My Sweet Girl ~ Brittany

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Date: 7/14/2011 9:50:00 PM
Rick,,, another, Congratulations on your contest entry! Thank you for entering your dedicated poem in my contest and also for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:51:00 AM
Lovely heartfeltly penned,Chris. And well done on winning best dedicated poem. Bless up Paul.
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Date: 7/13/2011 2:16:00 PM
Many congrats on all your recent wins, Rick : )
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations ^RIck for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:22:00 AM
congratulations on your win in p.d's contest!
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win sponsored by P.D.Great writing.
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your fantastic win in the contest with this stirring tender piece my friend.. simply intense..luv..
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Date: 7/13/2011 7:56:00 AM
Rick, this poem is so beautifully written and what a lovely dedication to sweet Brittany, and congratulations on your wonderful win in PD's Dedication Contest~~
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congrats to you on his touching write..always Michael
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:02:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Rick
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lay's "My Children" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:25:00 PM
lCongratulation on your sweet girl and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:01:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your wonderful winning poem in children contest with this precious wwrite my friend.. very beautiful words describing luv and emotion.. enjoy..
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Date: 6/16/2011 2:55:00 PM
Enjoyed this very lyrical verse..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by for your presence was like a ray of sunshine this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2011 2:34:00 PM
I bet she's the light of your life, Rick. Love the way the cathedral bells rang out just as Brittany was born. A good omen for her future. Delightful description! Love, Carolyn
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