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May Darren recover swiftly!

Be part of the world, completely enthralled, Quintessentially apt, to a degree, Though others you may find rather appalled, You may find yourself asking, should this be? Thus live your life through your own worldly eyes, There will always come a day for you too, In which you can repent and realise, That there is nobody else quite like you. You, marked in colours of blue azure sky, Wear your colours with pride in your bright day, At night in the hues of darkness don't cry, In the mirror, you're a rainbow, not grey. Change the world with your spirit, remain bright, Bring happiness, bring music, bring more light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/1/2017 6:34:00 PM
I felt relaxed after reading your poem. It exercise my mouth into a smile. Good write. Bravo!!
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Date: 3/28/2017 9:06:00 PM
Wolf this is an amazing write, well done to both of you and what a beautiful image~
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 9:09:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Constance /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 11:59:00 AM
Beautifully done...brought me a smile
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 8:25:00 PM
I'm glad it did, Tim! Thank you very much mate /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 11:11:00 AM
Another brilliant collaboration with superb results! A seven to each! Keep collaborating!
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Date: 3/28/2017 8:24:00 PM
Thank you for reading us today, Demetrios, enjoy the rest of yours my friend /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 9:46:00 AM
Inspiring and beautiful ... The last line is splendidly unique ...
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Date: 3/28/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 9:27:00 AM
Good Morning White Wolf and yes Darren too. The both of you are amazing. I loved the first words of "Be part of the world," How grand is that. Very. Thank you both for sharing your work and talent. You both work well together. Congratulations on the collaboration. Thank you White Wolf for sharing. Have a wonderful morning.
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Lisa! For leaving such a wonderful comment /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 8:38:00 AM
What a nice Collaboration to read today! Very well done, both of you :)
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 8:23:00 AM
What a beautiful uplifting poem you ans Darren have written.:-) hugs Jan xx
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 7:44:00 AM
A truly uplifting message written by an inspired duo:) Amitiés
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 8:19:00 PM
Thank you for you nice comment /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 6:08:00 AM
Am encouraging and uplifting poem and a wonderful collaboration from two of our favorite poets. Great job both of you. Speedy recovery Darren.
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Date: 3/28/2017 8:18:00 PM
Yes, he is still in ICU, but will be back soon! Thank you very much, Chris /|\
Date: 3/28/2017 4:10:00 AM
- A wonderful and uplifting write from the two of you :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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White Wolf
Date: 3/28/2017 8:16:00 PM
You are too kind, thank you /|\

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