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when your heart is weak not beating well. Your tired and weariness overcomes I will hold your hand, whispering softly in your ears I am here for you. Time has come your eyes saying goodbye your heart no longer beats I will hold your hand saying farewell not goodbye I was here for you. I hold you close in a last embrace my heart is broken. Time to let you go...I kiss your lips and turn away. Knowing, I was here for you. Penned 3 Oct 2017

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Date: 11/1/2017 10:46:00 PM
Back with congrats on the best new poem number one, hey that's pretty great, and it's a poem for one of my contests, so I feel good too!
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Date: 11/1/2017 11:23:00 PM
Thank you for the congrats plus thank you for running the contest...Seren
Date: 10/27/2017 3:45:00 PM
Holding someone's hand when they pass is one of the greatest gifts you you can give to a dying person, regardless if they are your loved one or a stranger. This is a beautiful poem Seren. Congratulations on having it as number two on the Best New Poems List! : )
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:55:00 PM
thank you Connie..... take a peep at my bugles call one i posted last night. not many will cos its not contest..... thanks again.. Seren
Date: 10/22/2017 7:45:00 AM
This poem brings comfort for those that need it. Well done my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:55:00 PM
thank you....Seren
Date: 10/20/2017 12:24:00 PM
Seren, sadly beautiful.
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Date: 10/17/2017 5:54:00 PM
Well said.
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Date: 10/13/2017 4:44:00 AM
Seren - sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - keep up the wonderful work! :-)
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:58:00 PM
Back just to say congrats on POTD!!!! :)
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:00:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beauty and your potd too !
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Date: 10/11/2017 1:10:00 PM
Wonderful poem Seren, congrats on POTD! Congrats also on a fine placement in my contest!
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:00:00 AM
Such a moving poem Seren I have a tear in my eye:-( Congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2017 11:27:00 AM
Hi Jan thanks for stopping by....Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 11:12:00 PM
Wonderful write, Seren, congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/6/2017 11:26:00 PM
Hugs Eve and thx. ...Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 9:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem of no regrets. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/6/2017 12:49:00 PM
thank you Sunlite, am so surprised...Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 8:31:00 AM
Big congratulations on the POTD
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Date: 10/6/2017 1:07:00 PM
thanks Tim am so surprised Thank you...Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 6:49:00 AM
Lovely lyric Seren, congratulations for POTD honors and good luck in the contest...
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Date: 10/6/2017 1:07:00 PM
Charlie thank you so much....Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Seren, with your beautiful, moving poem.
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Date: 10/6/2017 1:15:00 PM
Agnes am shocked it was so honoured thank you so much for stopping by....Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 6:07:00 AM
Tender heart rendering pen Seren, lovely, congratulations :) xomo
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:55:00 PM
Maureen many thanks....Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 5:42:00 AM
You and Jan...back to back potd. Your write is filled with compassion and love, Seren. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Lin. Are your fingers twitching lol....Seren
Date: 10/6/2017 3:52:00 AM
Yes Seren!!!. Poem of the Day, so very well deserved :)
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Date: 10/6/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thanks my friend...Seren
Date: 10/5/2017 9:55:00 PM
This brought a tear to my eye, ok more than one, this is so beautiful Seren and a fav!
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Date: 10/6/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thx my friend ...Seren
Date: 10/5/2017 10:55:00 AM
This is simply beautiful and heartfelt my friend... It brought tears to my eyes.
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:04:00 PM
A heartwarming and wrenching poem all at once and lovely too. This is a favorite <3
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Date: 10/6/2017 1:16:00 PM
thank you Sara Ella,,,Seren
Date: 10/4/2017 3:38:00 PM
You are definitely a person friends can count on. A lovely piece. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:20:00 PM
Hi Richard long time no see... Thanks for stopping by...Seren
Date: 10/4/2017 8:45:00 AM
That is so beautiful Seren! You have written such a tremendous poem here this morning! The eventual death of a loved one is so heartbreaking, but knowing you were there for them is monumentally therapeutic and wonderful for that dying individual! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Russell. Yes at this time you are needed .sad though a time . Hope it's what was wanted for contest... If not it doesn't matter..... Thank you again...Seren
Date: 10/4/2017 7:45:00 AM
Beautifully written within the sadness. We all crave to with someone to be with
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:52:00 PM
Tim is your keyboard following mine lol. Thank you for commenting ...Seren