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I lay awake in that dark hour and was reflecting on my life From all the travelling I had done to the breakup with my wife I was an architectural painter and was very successful too And after leaving Oxford University that's what I'd wanted to do. But winds of war were blowing and we were at war with Germany And I, Charles Ryder had enlisted, as an officer in the army It took me a while to accept, the harsh regime of the military Because I'd been a free spirit and answered to no one but me. I learnt that soon we would be moving to a secret location To prepare for our deployment to a middle eastern nation The camp was a hive of activity as we were preparing to go Where we were going was a mystery, nobody seemed to know. We marched to the railway station it was a cold and dark night The train with its blacked out windows looked a forboding sight We all boarded the train and then settled down for the journey To that place unknown, that had been shrouded in secrecy. After a couple of hours the train stopped at an unknown railway station We all disembarked and lined up and marched to our secret destination After a couple of hours we'd set up camp and settled down for the night Then everything became quite peaceful, that is until morning light. The sounds of vehicles and men , woke me up from my slumber And where this transit camp was, I couldn't help but wonder I got dressed and headed for the mess tent for some morning tea And as I gazed up at the grey sky line, it stood majestically before me. It was if someone had shone a bright light into my distant past Old memories resurfaced and I just stood there totally aghast Brideshead Castle looked magnificent in the grey morning light And I remembered being invited there by Lord Sebastian Flyte. It had been well over twenty years since I had first been here After befriending Lord Sebastian at Oxford in my first year He'd invited me to stay over, to meet his aristocratic family I'll never forget their kindness and how they'd all welcomed me. My thoughts were shattered by Hooper, my lieutenant driving a jeep Who said "I've just been in the big grand old house for a peep There's statues of men with trumpets, paintings and all kinds of bling Outside in the gardens, giant fountains, you never saw such a thing" I answered "Yes I did Hooper, I have been here many times before" He said "Then you know all about it and it's magnificent splendour" I told him" Better go and get the platoon ready" he said" Righty oh " And I was again left alone in my deep thoughts of a time long ago. I had breakfast and then walked up to the house, it's layout was vast And I wondered if my visit would encounter any ghosts from the past I saw the family's Nanny Hawkins and she immediately recognised me She made some fresh tea and brought me up to date about the family. It had brought me some kind of closure as I'd left under a cloud And looking back I'd let the family down of which I was not proud I left after about an hour and said goodbye, and went on my way And hoped unpleasant memories of my past would now fade away. Written on the 18th September 2022. Inspired by the opening scene of Brideshead Revisited, a television series produced in 1981 by Granada Television and was based on the book of the same name written by the English author Evelyn Waugh.

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Date: 10/3/2022 3:00:00 PM
My dear friend, Tom, IS EVERYTHING ALRIGHT? Blessings.
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Date: 10/3/2022 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios, all okay and hope you are too. I'm in Italy at the moment travelling around until Sunday night. Tom
Date: 9/29/2022 12:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading of the time and imagery and feeling, Tom.
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Date: 9/29/2022 12:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well and enjoying your week. Tom
Date: 9/28/2022 10:55:00 AM
Hi Tom your Historical rhetoric's are simply breath taking, your research and approach are so picturesquely explained, one thinks the are living in the times. Well done, BLESSINGS,Jennifer
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Date: 9/28/2022 1:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer, it was inspired by the TV series. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 9/27/2022 7:25:00 PM
WoW! Tom, You are an outstanding storyteller. Your amazing writing had me hook line sinker until the very end. Good rhymes and content. Excellent job.Have good day-Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2022 3:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you too have a lovely day. Tom
Date: 9/26/2022 3:37:00 AM
Tom, I can say it no better than others, your narrative writing is superb and I always enjoy the read! A happy week ahead to you!!!
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Date: 9/26/2022 6:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, I'm happy you enjoyed it Much appreciated. Have a great week ahead too. Tom
Date: 9/25/2022 10:09:00 AM
Phenomenal with a golden pen! Tis you…Sir Cunningham, you did it again! 5 Star Review!!!!! Hugs from your friend, Panagiota xx
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Date: 9/25/2022 10:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 9/25/2022 8:29:00 AM
In rereading your poem again, outloud to me wife, it brought tears to my eyes. The rhythm and emotions of the story touched my soul. I am in awe of your gift of telling stories / narratives, through your poetry, Tom. Again, here! here! my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/25/2022 10:28:00 AM
Thank you very much again Bill for your return visit. Tom
Date: 9/25/2022 8:10:00 AM
Your Narrative poems are so well written and rhymed, I always get the sense I'm present. Moving story and beautiful seeting. The picture was a dreamscape to view. I enjoyed reading and reflecting on the beauty and ugliness of the period on history. Thanks for sharing your gift with us my friend. A FAV, for me to read over and over. Bless you for the time you invest in informing and blessing others with you exquisite poetry, Tom. Bill
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Date: 9/25/2022 10:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Bill, I'm happy that you enjoyed the story. It was a brilliant production produced by Granada television back in 1981. Thank you also for faving it, much appreciated. Tom
Date: 9/25/2022 3:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this Tom. Your poetic narrative rhymes so well too. Cheers Anne :-)
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Date: 9/25/2022 8:49:00 AM
Hi Tom, I admire the fact that you can write long stories in poetic form. I sometimes have a hard enough time shuffling the lines around on my own poems and they're just short one's. So Kudo's to you on being able to write these beauties and have them rhyme as well. Thank you, my weekend was a relaxed one. Hope you had a good weekend too. Anne :-)
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Date: 9/25/2022 6:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, Love to tell a story in poetic form, I have to do a lot of shuffling to get rhyming words to fit. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Date: 9/24/2022 11:31:00 AM
Revisiting the past and yet it is the future, can be disorienting. My childhood road was all broken up and I was like…there was a lake here. Saw someone and he told me the lake was still there…he owned the property and it was fenced now.
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Kim, you're right though, revisiting old memories can stir up all kinds of emotions. Tom
Date: 9/24/2022 2:54:00 AM
This is an amazing story. It is so nostalgic. Very well done Tom.
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Date: 9/24/2022 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much BJ , I'm happy you enjoyed it. It was a brilliant show produced in 1981 and based on the novel of the same name by Evelyn Waugh. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 9/23/2022 1:11:00 PM
A story written by in poetic form. Seems like I have heard that name on a TV program or series before. I enjoyed reading it. Thaks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/24/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/22/2022 12:11:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Tom with great rhyme and flow along with nice imagery too. Hope all is well with you, blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/22/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon, im happy that you enjoyed it. All good here and I hope you are too. Tom
Date: 9/21/2022 6:26:00 PM
Ah, so now I know what the place looks like. I have heard the name before. Interesting story, Tom.
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Date: 9/22/2022 12:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, im happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/21/2022 1:32:00 AM
Nice one Tom! I've just noticed the date it was first shown: 1981 !!! I didn't realize it was that long ago! I saw one of the BR films but not the latest one. Bucket list for me too. Cheers - Gary
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/21/2022 4:56:00 AM
Lol! I got my Bridesheads mixed up with my Downtons..the films I'm referring to above are Downton not Brideshead ... :) Note to self..dont type anything before you've had your morning coffee. :) Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/21/2022 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Gary, I too saw the film but preferred the series, surprised it hasn't been shown again as it was British broadcasting at its best. It concentrated more on the family as opposed to Downton that included.the rabble downstairs lol. Loved Carsons character in it though. Tom
Date: 9/20/2022 8:32:00 AM
Nicely penned and captivating narrative Tom. Linda
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Date: 9/20/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 7:43:00 PM
Alright! Another piece of uncharted territory for me. Thanks, Professor T.C!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/7/2022 2:55:00 PM
I'll go for the book, Tom. ~ Owl-eyed Bookworm
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2022 11:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon, it was a gripping series and well worth watching if you get the chance failing that the book too is well worth a read. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 1:11:00 PM
A captivating poetic narrative that inspires the heart and mind of the reader, my dearest friend, Tom. Excellently done, as always! Be blessed!
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Date: 9/19/2022 1:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Demetrios, I'm happy that you enjoyed it Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 12:25:00 PM
Tom this is my ultimate favorite of all your Poetry. Your words convey a script that other than the writer Evelyn Waugh could attain in describing and sharing. I would not be surprised to see this Honored as POTD. Your Narrative series is as you were the author of. Magnificent and I sincerely bow my head to you as I read this Narrative of yours. I congratulate you in this fine effort of yours. God bless you and thank you for sharing. Your writing abilities to write this are amazing...
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Date: 9/19/2022 4:39:00 PM
Tom thank you for the added information...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2022 12:51:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words Michael, I'm flattered by them and honoured that you enjoyed it. It was inspired by the opening scene of the TV series Brideshead Revisited which of course was based on the novel of the same name. The picture is Castle Howard in Yorkshire which became Brideshead Castle for the series. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 9:07:00 AM
Wonderful poetry and a great story/poem of the opening scene of the series Tom… Belle
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Date: 9/19/2022 9:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Belle, at last someone who's seen it lol. It was so well made over forty years ago and paved the way for Downton Abbey and series like it. Its on my bucket list to visit Castle Howard where it was filmed. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 7:23:00 AM
Wow Marmite Man what a wonderfully captivating and interesting tale…you are a masterful story teller! Cheers…Vegemite Girl!! X
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Date: 9/19/2022 8:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Deb, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're well now. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 5:44:00 AM
Wow. I don't know of this, but found your writing interesting Tom. I enjoy your story telling. :)
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Date: 9/19/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Have a lovely week. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 4:38:00 AM
Another intriguing tale and an effortless read, dear Tom: I have heard of this show but not seen it. Will have to look for it now. Have a wonderful day. SuZ
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Date: 9/19/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Suz, it was a top class production made in 1981, hope you too have a lovely day. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 4:36:00 AM
Your visit to the old castle and the nostalgic memories it revived in you have found ample space in your beautiful poem. Much enjoyed both the poem and the image projected against a hazy backdrop, dear Tom
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Date: 9/19/2022 6:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, it was very popular over here, produced in 1981. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/19/2022 12:06:00 AM
Well, now of course, I want to see the series and find out all about Ryder's past. You never fail to capture my interest when reading you, Tom.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2022 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Tom. I'm all better.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2022 12:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Jenna, the series was made over forty years ago and it has stood the test of time, that was the opening scene and then of course it went back in time to tell his story, of course I bought the box set, the soundtrack and the book by Evelyn Waugh. Hope you're OK now and have a great time in Florida. Tom
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