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Breathless Sun

The boughs have all but broken winds drift silently searching streams rising out of a desert cradling close what's left of me Temporarily the pause stings missing moments meant to hold off fears gorgeous set me free whisper secrets meant to be Comfort stage your place on the X and the O's of heartstrings playing on palpitating the pulse felt deep inside rewinding endless soulful sounds of love Curl with me the corner of your lips kiss me in the cycle of your dreams ride off with me into last gasps of the final breathless sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 10:19:00 AM
Your words just yell out please... :) lovely Tim ~*
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Date: 8/5/2017 11:24:00 AM
Wow, if someone would say these things to me??? Wonderful.
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Date: 8/5/2017 6:55:00 AM
My friend, Tim you are becoming increasingly romantic and all ladies I see are elated! Should I be jealous my friend? Haha! happy for you and your marvelous writing!
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Date: 8/5/2017 6:26:00 AM
What could be more romantic than riding off into the sunset with the one you love? Nice write, Tim.
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Date: 8/5/2017 3:56:00 AM
A wonderful expression "Breathless sun". You have the great imagination to toy with your ideas! Well penned :) Sunita
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Date: 8/5/2017 1:25:00 AM
Nicely penned my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:03:00 PM
Tim be assured this is great......Seren
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Date: 8/4/2017 7:40:00 PM
Tim, I agree with all the ladies who have commented below. You sure know how to write romance. Simply beautiful!!
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:52:00 PM
breathtaking read that can charm any woman... one big sigh, tim... huggs
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:41:00 PM
You have a way of making us gals breathless reading your romantic poems. So beautiful!!! :) :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 2:31:00 PM
Your words leave me breathless Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2017 12:49:00 PM
Wow Tim Beautiful! and .. That last stanza is outstanding for sure :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 12:41:00 PM
yes, good ending!
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Date: 8/4/2017 12:38:00 PM
Love that last line Tim, great work...
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