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Breathless

Breathless in cascade release, an orchid's ardent blaze a warm whiff embrace. A flickering flame awakes a tame, harmonize warm smile, into romantic lust. Swift wind burst orchid's fragrance in darken moment, amid midnight twilight, a passion sound within, warm cinders soothe budding moment like there's no tomorrow. Silence gently fades breathless in cascade release. 1/30/2023 1. breathless Writing Challenge - B Word Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/6/2023 7:21:00 PM
Breathless reader here, awestruck by the beauty of this poem. Bravo, Eve! :) gw
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve! Oorchid. Moonlight. Fragrance. Passion. Indeed! Bravo!
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:35:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Date: 2/3/2023 5:08:00 AM
Such an interesting beautiful write on the topic dear Eve... Congratulations on your win in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 2/2/2023 9:55:00 AM
Your poem is really lovely, Eve! Congrats!
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Date: 2/1/2023 2:03:00 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2023 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A romantic/wonderful write. A great ending. Have a blessed day..........
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Date: 1/31/2023 11:18:00 AM
- Beautiful writing, dear Eve :) - A winning poem ... I'm sure :) - hugs
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Date: 1/31/2023 6:35:00 AM
Eve, you have written a very beautiful poem here. Certain varieties of exceptional orchids give forth a heavenly aroma that causes one to lose their breath. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 1/31/2023 4:56:00 AM
Beautiful breathlessness, Eve:) sublime writing:)
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Date: 1/31/2023 1:50:00 AM
Some special orchids exude a wonderful fragrance that leaves you breathless. Well-written for the contest. Best for a win.
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Date: 1/31/2023 1:43:00 AM
Oh, so beautiful; I see this placing high; good luck.
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