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BREATHLESS

Perfect ambiance in this crowded room 
I ask the band to play my favorite tune
Yes, I've seen you over there...
Such beauty.. far beyond compare
You're leaving me breathless 

Your eyes.. how they mesmerize 
That look.. completely irresistible
And your desire..  it's undeniable 
You want me to take you in my arms
To thrill you with all my charms..
If you only knew, you're the only girl I see
That your charms have got a hold of me
You're leaving me breathless

In that little black dress, I must confess
This dance is like a perfect dream
Soft lips begging for sips of some
Hot curves tease of nectar to come
You whisper, make love spectacular
You're leaving me breathless

So breathe on me
I'll show you how
Things you never knew
That's right, Oh Wow
Make you scream
Girl, feel the best
So hard to breathe
I'm leaving you breathless

And the world around us disappears
It's like only you and me are here
Endless delights, let's dance awhile
Where you're so close, I feel your smile
Your heart's beating against my chest
You're leaving me breathless

So breathe on me
I'll show you how
Things you never knew
That's right, Oh Wow
Make you scream
Girl, feel the best
So hard to breathe
I'm leaving you breathless

~Lyric Man

Note: This is an echo song to Alexis Y.'s "Thrill" and a happy escape from my last write!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/1/2019 2:07:00 PM
You did a good job on this one. Tops. Nicely done, said and written. NICE!
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Date: 7/16/2018 8:01:00 AM
True art!
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Date: 7/8/2018 5:20:00 PM
This poem should be a song! Great imagery.
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Date: 7/8/2018 11:53:00 AM
Powerful my friend I just like this write
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Date: 7/6/2018 11:48:00 PM
Your poem "Breathless" is beautiful you are a wonderful writer loved it. Ty for your sweet comments. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:12:00 AM
Breathless in anticipation and delivery, LM! A tease for the imagination. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/3/2018 9:51:00 AM
Breathtaking lyrics. Love it.
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Date: 7/3/2018 2:04:00 AM
Ooo la la! Wow you have left me breathless! Smile! Loved this spicy little write lol! Umm err yes lol! Lived it next time I will read before bed! Lol! Hugs Brenda
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:25:00 PM
Hi Lyric, you write of love in such a free and sensual way in this piece. It is wonderful to read and let your mind wander through the scene. This is truly excellent, but then, i have come to expect this from you my friend. Have a wonderful weekend and i will keep my wonderful thoughts for a little while. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:41:00 PM
Good lyrics
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:57:00 AM
Weeee! Very hot! You are an amazing romantic writer. :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:04:00 AM
In a good way it made me giggle like if I was blushing. Very good poem.
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:27:00 PM
Oh my!! This is sensual, sexy and very passionate. Yet, it holds beauty, love and romance perfectly. Your thoughts leave me breathless. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/28/2018 2:30:00 PM
Hello Lyric Man, this poem left me wondering what the woman will do next. a beautiful written poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/28/2018 1:02:00 PM
This is very well written with impeccable imagery. Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers contemplation and amusement. The descriptive imagery clings to this piece like a second skin adding beauty to the words as they are visualized through the mind's eye. Emile.
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Date: 6/28/2018 11:28:00 AM
It's like trance....great.
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:53:00 AM
Yes, I believe a dance can do all that. Your poem is very sensual and brings back memories of past days.
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:30:00 AM
To breathe Her in...So beautifully .Such charm in your poem Dave...Leaving the girl in the black dress breathless..I guess..Hehe :)
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:04:00 AM
Lovely lyric Dave and great that Alexis inspired you. It certainly reminded me of my younger days. Tom
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:39:00 AM
A unique experience each of your Lyric is my friend, L.M!
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:38:00 AM
Love it
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:29:00 AM
Ah, yes. That moment of being smitten. I remember that. // Barry
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:18:00 AM
Your lyric leaves us all breathless. Nice one LM!
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Date: 6/28/2018 7:24:00 AM
I feel that I've been transported to a time in my youth, LM and I so enjoyed reliving these feelings for a moment or two!! Sure woke me up this morning!
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Date: 6/28/2018 7:02:00 AM
You are a true romantic Lyric Man..enjoyed the portrait you created of the only girl you see..you know so well what she wants to hear..charming write, as always.
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