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SHE LEFT ME BREATHLESS

[Setting The Stage] She slides in, like that sax riff you can’t forget Red lipstick chipped—like she just laughed at a secret Heels clicking on the cracked tile floor Every head turns, mine stumbles like it’s sore She shoots me a look—wait, was that a grin? Freeze up, heart racing—Gucci aisle, where to begin? [Excitement Builds] She floats like she’s walking on spilled moonlight And I’m gasping like I just ran through a midnight fight [Tension Builds] You got me breathless, girl, no doubt One glance and my soul wants to shout Are you even looking? Should I stand tall? Did I drool? Yep… real smooth, that’s my downfall Can’t find my voice, spine’s turned to jelly You leave me breathless, like a clumsy alley [No Clue] Your hair’s a slow-mo movie scene I try to play it cool—trip over a magazine You bite your lip, I swear you winked Brain’s out cold, and my pits have stinked She’s walking right here—what do I say? “Hey” or just pray that I don’t slip away? [Poetic Panic] You’re a sonnet wrapped in silk and smoke I’m a guy who just spilled coffee on his coat [Party Panic] Should I flex? Or just look like a fool? Why’d I pick these socks that don’t match my shoes? She’s Venus, ready to destroy And I’m an old Game Boy with no joy [Regroup] You got me breathless, fried and shook Practiced this moment—forgot the look You’re heading this way, yeah, I’m on track Ready to shine… if I don’t crack Jaw’s dropping, heart’s out of line You leave me breathless, every single time [Bridge Over Troubled Waters] She’s closer now, eyes locked on mine Heartbeat’s racing, out of time Hips sway like a jazz solo Is this fate? Or just a cruel show? I smile, nod, brace for the dive She’s ten feet… five… oh no, survive! She walks… Right past me. Turns... Wraps her arms around Bond. James Bond. Suit crisp, smile sharp as a knife Hairline sharp enough to cut life He winks at me I just nod… and wheeze [Crushing Close] You got me breathless, but not the way I hoped Misread the script, my heart just choked You’re a queen in heels, and me? I tried But 007’s got your side Still can’t breathe, still can’t shine You leave me breathless… but you weren’t mine [He’s Whipped] (Breathless…) Not the hero in this scene, huh? (Bond guy probably buys lotion…) Still breathless… And sweating like I ran a marathon uphill... Note: Grateful for an 3rd place finish in the "Breathless" Contest. Perfect ambiance in this crowded room

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/1/2019 2:07:00 PM
You did a good job on this one. Tops. Nicely done, said and written. NICE!
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Date: 7/16/2018 8:01:00 AM
True art!
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Date: 7/8/2018 5:20:00 PM
This poem should be a song! Great imagery.
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Date: 7/8/2018 11:53:00 AM
Powerful my friend I just like this write
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Date: 7/6/2018 11:48:00 PM
Your poem "Breathless" is beautiful you are a wonderful writer loved it. Ty for your sweet comments. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:12:00 AM
Breathless in anticipation and delivery, LM! A tease for the imagination. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/3/2018 9:51:00 AM
Breathtaking lyrics. Love it.
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:25:00 PM
Hi Lyric, you write of love in such a free and sensual way in this piece. It is wonderful to read and let your mind wander through the scene. This is truly excellent, but then, i have come to expect this from you my friend. Have a wonderful weekend and i will keep my wonderful thoughts for a little while. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:41:00 PM
Good lyrics
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:57:00 AM
Weeee! Very hot! You are an amazing romantic writer. :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:04:00 AM
In a good way it made me giggle like if I was blushing. Very good poem.
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:27:00 PM
Oh my!! This is sensual, sexy and very passionate. Yet, it holds beauty, love and romance perfectly. Your thoughts leave me breathless. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/28/2018 2:30:00 PM
Hello Lyric Man, this poem left me wondering what the woman will do next. a beautiful written poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/28/2018 1:02:00 PM
This is very well written with impeccable imagery. Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers contemplation and amusement. The descriptive imagery clings to this piece like a second skin adding beauty to the words as they are visualized through the mind's eye. Emile.
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Date: 6/28/2018 11:28:00 AM
It's like trance....great.
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:53:00 AM
Yes, I believe a dance can do all that. Your poem is very sensual and brings back memories of past days.
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:30:00 AM
To breathe Her in...So beautifully .Such charm in your poem Dave...Leaving the girl in the black dress breathless..I guess..Hehe :)
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:04:00 AM
Lovely lyric Dave and great that Alexis inspired you. It certainly reminded me of my younger days. Tom
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:39:00 AM
A unique experience each of your Lyric is my friend, L.M!
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:38:00 AM
Love it
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:29:00 AM
Ah, yes. That moment of being smitten. I remember that. // Barry
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:18:00 AM
Your lyric leaves us all breathless. Nice one LM!
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Date: 6/28/2018 7:24:00 AM
I feel that I've been transported to a time in my youth, LM and I so enjoyed reliving these feelings for a moment or two!! Sure woke me up this morning!
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Date: 6/28/2018 7:02:00 AM
You are a true romantic Lyric Man..enjoyed the portrait you created of the only girl you see..you know so well what she wants to hear..charming write, as always.
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Date: 6/28/2018 5:46:00 AM
Beautiful...
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