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Brave Tom

At night Tom heard a knocking at his door Known to be brave, he tried to ignore Said a voice- “I am Death Have come to take your breath” Afterwards, none saw Tom, the rest is lore! (This is not about our gentleman friend Tom Cunningham.... He is indeed a brave man..... :)

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Date: 4/14/2022 5:03:00 PM
I liked your Limerick, Valsa. That is the way it usually works. LOL Hugs, Bill
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Date: 4/9/2022 11:36:00 PM
Death won't dare try to take Tom Cunningham. Tom would squeeze the life out of him! ~ Just sayin'... Smiles, gw
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Date: 4/9/2022 3:26:00 PM
I am thinking he was out of there like the in the work "The Appointment In Samarra". I enjoyed reading your work today. I liked it for its brevity. Your visits to my are always uplifting. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2022 6:25:00 AM
Ah, a mystery surrounding a "disappearance"! Good one, Valsa. Janice
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Date: 4/8/2022 10:16:00 PM
You are indeed, "the queen of limericks" my dear friend. Excellent write!
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:16:00 PM
Death, dear Valsa, always intervenes when we least expect it, making for a very smart and interesting Limerick. This Limerick has been a lot of fun for me. Blessings
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Date: 4/8/2022 11:14:00 AM
A visit from the death angel. Impressive, limerick Vasal. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 4/8/2022 10:49:00 AM
Tom, the piper's son? Stealing a pig may be easier than stealing a cow, but the penalty is the same . . . . .Aloha!
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Date: 4/8/2022 8:10:00 AM
A very witty and amusing Limerick, dearest Valsa, that I have enjoyed a lot!
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Date: 4/8/2022 6:12:00 AM
Hmmm, great one, Valsa:) death mostly comes knocking when we least expect it...
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Date: 4/8/2022 5:13:00 AM
This lore makes an impact. When death talks we have to listen. Well spun, Valsa.
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Date: 4/8/2022 3:28:00 AM
This is sad & cunningly funny. Love u my Sister
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:15:00 AM
I loved this limerick. Tom will be pleased you mentioned him.
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