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Bored In Manhattan Not For Contest

I was bored in Manhattan that day
So decided to pay for a lay
He was handsome and young
And was VERY well hung
I walked like John Wayne all of the day

Thanks to James Fraser's Bored In Manhattan poem for the inspiration!

Just make me laugh contest
Sponsored by Christine Lehman

27th December 2015

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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Casarah Nance Date: 7/21/2016 9:06:00 AM saw this on the home page and it gave me another laugh ;) hugs x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/21/2016 9:23:00 AM Thanks Cas - do drop by at the footbridge - would love to see you add to the fun lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 7/20/2016 10:44:00 AM Hi Jan, Lol! I enjoyed this naughty and hilarious write. You should give a limerick course because you do them so well. Congrats on have this limerick feautured:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 10:46:00 AM Thanks Alexis - I am planning a humour book - still got a lot more poems to write for it but it will be published one day:-) hugs jan xx

Daver Austin Date: 7/19/2016 12:07:00 PM Great! Wayne made one great movie - Stage coach - You can have the rest. "All right, Bart! Stand up or I'll shoot ya where ya sit." Congrats. Love, daver Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 10:44:00 AM LOL thanks Daver:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley Date: 7/17/2016 10:33:00 PM Forigve me, Jan, but I can't remember us having relations- you must have got me drunk :) Congrats on being a featured poet, Viv x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/18/2016 3:41:00 AM SHHHH Mr Viv don't tell the world our little secret lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 3/24/2016 8:37:00 PM lol Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 3/25/2016 7:35:00 AM I would love to visit Broadway and the Statue if Liberty Jan Allison Date: 3/25/2016 7:31:00 AM Glad you enjoyed Tim - am sure Manhattan is pretty cool in reality:-) hugs Jan xx

Sean Kelly Date: 2/1/2016 2:37:00 AM Yupppppp ! you got . The Old Gunslinger Walk ! S-Mail for you ! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2016 11:33:00 AM I think this is one of my faves Sean lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter Date: 1/7/2016 10:26:00 PM Ha ha, ha--oh so very funny and beyond-the-pale clever! (I'm sure no one has ever called Jan "Pilgrim.") Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/8/2016 2:26:00 AM ha ha thanks Paul I did have fun writing this fun take on the contest title:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne Date: 1/2/2016 2:50:00 PM LOL, couldn't resist reading another. Love it!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/2/2016 2:52:00 PM I love writing with humour jack - my other 'Bored in Manhattan' poem is humourous too:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/31/2015 12:25:00 AM OK - glad I read and oh, how I grinned. Now I want to check out Fraser's poem ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/31/2015 3:55:00 AM LOL CayCay just having fun as its not for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez Date: 12/29/2015 7:28:00 PM LOL! Oh Jan... Loved your humor. Thanks for my first laugh this morning! hugs! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/29/2015 7:34:00 PM I wrote another one - not for the contest- as if lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance Date: 12/28/2015 5:58:00 PM HAHAHAHAHAHAH....HAHAHA...hahah Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 6:12:00 PM So glad I made you smile - its not for the contest I know I would get an N/A so will never enter this sponsors contests but it doesn't stop me writing on the theme:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser Date: 12/28/2015 11:57:00 AM Oh my, I'm in deep wit now, it is wit isn't it, or sounds like it, sh ~~ oops I'll be getting panned for this comment. It's better I wipe my words, and mossy away to wit another day ;) ~~ hugs ~~ James xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 12:08:00 PM ha ha ha you and me both in the wit - long may it continue lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor Date: 12/28/2015 11:06:00 AM lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 11:08:00 AM Not for contest of course :-)Do pop by Broken Wings she has done a hilarious poem too:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 8:39:00 AM I too, Jan, have never been to Manhatten, but who needs to after reading this!! Very enjoyable! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 8:41:00 AM I thought I would do a fun write not for the contest of course!:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/28/2015 5:26:00 AM If the heart sings it doesn't matter how one walks, dear Jan! I am smiling! Although many times in Manhattan never encounter a girl to make walk like Wayne! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 6:06:00 AM Ha ha ha Demtrios - just having a bit of fun here - and I have no intention of ever being bored should I visit Manhattan lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/28/2015 12:27:00 AM Girl...send him over this way. I don't mind walking like Wayne...Not at all! ;) Oh dear...woman. I'm sure you don't need to pay for a lay...hahahhaha! ;) Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 1:19:00 AM Poetic Licence lol - Just having a bit of fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France Date: 12/27/2015 6:58:00 PM Jan, this is hilarious, you have such a great sense of humor now, I have to go see James poem that inspired you, I love it 7 ~ Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/28/2015 7:44:00 AM And wow, look at the views, well done, my funny little poet ~ Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 7:00:00 PM I try and write with humour whenever I can - I can lay the blame of this write purely at James's feet he inspired me with his poem lol:-) hugs Jan xxx

Joseph May Date: 12/27/2015 6:43:00 PM haha ..Bored in Manhattan in more ways than one...nicely done Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 6:48:00 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/27/2015 4:22:00 PM giggles, lol... been to manhattan many times and this surely knocked me off, jan... okay, so it's just a poem not entered, mmm?... grreat rhyming scheme!..huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 4:31:00 PM I had fun with it Nette no it won't be entered in the contest just a fun write based on the contest title:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/27/2015 4:17:00 PM Oh this is hilarious Jan!!!! Good luck in contest, this should be first place! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/27/2015 4:31:00 PM oh well, its a winner for me!!!!! Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 4:30:00 PM I won't be entering it in the contest Arthur - I am blocked by the sponsor so why put myself up for an N/A but I did have fun writing this limerick:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/27/2015 3:53:00 PM hahahaha. Not entered, right? You should anyway! If it were my contest, this would get a top spot because it is so dang funny. and gosh, Jan, how are you getting so good with your meter?? this is PERFECTLY metered!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 4:00:00 PM No way would I enter the contest - what would be the point I am blocked by the sponsor for my pooh poem so I would be guaranteed an N/A with this and I have enough of them already lol:-) I am happy just to have fun writing:-) hugs Jan xxx

Robyn Campbell Date: 12/27/2015 1:23:00 PM *snort* I giggled my head off. Fabulous! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 6:13:00 PM Ha ha ha James I remember that one too 'float float on' and all the names lol:-) hugs jan xxx James Fraser Date: 12/28/2015 11:51:00 AM So reminds of that classic track by the 'Floaters' ~~ 'Float On' :-0) Robyn Campbell Date: 12/27/2015 1:37:00 PM Too bad. This is THE winner. It would have to be. Floating pooh is an interesting topic. *wink* Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 1:26:00 PM Thanks Robyn you will be releived its not for the contest - pretty pointless as the sponsor has me blocked for writing a poem about a floating pooh - but I can still have fun writing and I was inspired by James's poem hee hee:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler Date: 12/27/2015 12:03:00 PM Hahaha! Didn't think you had it in you, Jan, but according to this poem you did! Keep out of Manhattan if you don't want to end up a paraplegic. Good laugh from this one. / M Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 12:20:00 PM Ha ha ha love that comment - it is pure fantasy Maurice and that is the way it will stay lol - I read James Fraser's contest entry and I had to write a poem based on that. I am blocked by the contest sponsor but I can still have fun as you can see lol:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 12/27/2015 10:29:00 AM Hahaha, I cannot stop laughing girl this is wonderful!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 10:30:00 AM Do read James' poem it is what inspired me lol:-) PS I have never been to Manhattan just in case you are wondering hahaha:-0 hugs Jan xxx