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Blue moon rising on a stormy night I sit sobbing without you Sadness, when we fell out of love The point of no return, drifting apart You broke my heart, my fragile heart Now you're gone, I'm missing you Guess it's over Tell me why Whispers on the wind Words: disappointment dejection disillusioned rejection A true tragic tale heartbreak loneliness, sad eyes a single tear Reflections in the moment precious moments carry me away... The scent of your soul breath of love shadows from the past personal memories After the rain I will survive letting go Spring is coming soon a new beginning inner peace Best Titles Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo (Every Line used is the original title of one of my poems) June 11th 2017

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Date: 7/3/2017 7:10:00 AM
Superb Jan, you had me feeling every word but your last stanza provides hope. Well done and congrats.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/3/2017 7:23:00 AM
Many thanks Phil I had great fun with the contest and was so inspired I wrote a poem which was a little bawdy and not for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/24/2017 5:32:00 AM
Up to #15 and climbing! ;-)
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Date: 6/24/2017 7:26:00 AM
Oh wow Lin I rarely look at the list - am smiling big time my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/20/2017 4:42:00 AM
Such a gripping poem, Jan. You crafted it so well. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 11:25:00 PM
Wow! How did I miss this beauty, Jan? Many congratulations on your first place win, well deserved:)
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:29:00 AM
Thanks Jo I have a smile like a Cheshire cat:-):-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 11:15:00 PM
Big Congrats to win top. Hugs
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:28:00 AM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 10:43:00 PM
great use of titles for this entry.. tough to to with single word titles.. congrats on the win
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:28:00 AM
Thanks Joseph it was a fabulous theme and I wrote a bawdy poem but this one is far more superior and suitable for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 10:18:00 PM
Great winning poem Jan, sooo good!!
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:26:00 AM
Thanks John I have the BIGGEST smile on my face:-) I have written the odd decent poem among the poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 9:41:00 PM
Wow Jan yours is really a stunner! You came full circle and I loved your uplifted ending! Congratulations on your first placement! ; )
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:25:00 AM
aww thanks Connie:-):-) I am more proud of this poem than folks will ever understand I wish I could make it a fave for myself lol. I was so inspired by the contest theme I wrote 2 poems but the other one is bawdy and this one is far superior so I put it in the contest and was delighted LuLoo liked it so much:-) Am delighted for you that you also got POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 8:47:00 PM
Wow! Congrats on your win with this great poem, Jan! Janice
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:23:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 5:35:00 PM
Jan, I can't believe how well all my best friends did with this challenge. Yours was amazing and so worthy of that first place win, that lots of us got. haha!! I LIKES when that happens!! Congrats.
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!! I was absolutely delighted that I got a top spot with you and many others and now I've now worked out why the first place winners list changed round when I was commenting . :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan...nicely done
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thanks Jospeh I really loved yours and the fact you got it to rhyme added to the challenge that was set:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2017 4:24:00 PM
It's like a sad love song this one until you get to the second last stanza and then it all starts cheering up again! Beautifully done
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thanks White Wolf I have a huge smile on my face - I was so inspired by the contest I wrote a poem that was bawdy but this one was the most suitable one for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/16/2017 8:02:00 AM
I love what you did with the challenge, Jan - your titles work beautifully together within one theme.
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Date: 6/16/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Agnes I am absolutely delighted with the way the poem turned out. Since i wrote my first poem in Nov 2013 I now have over 1400 poems on soup so with so many titles to choose from it was quite a challenge . I do hope LuLoo likes it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/15/2017 10:21:00 PM
WOW, Jan, I love what YOU did too. Super super job. FAVE!!!
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Date: 6/19/2017 4:04:00 PM
Maybe this proves to folks I just don't write poop poems Andrea!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/15/2017 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I surprise myself sometimes - 4.24 am I hope I can finally get some sleep now:-( coughing so much its driving me mad and i can't wake hubby:-(hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/13/2017 9:25:00 AM
Exceptional verses from beautiful titles my friend. Smooth flow and great imagery!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/14/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Robert I am delighted the poem is receiving so many comments. I wrote another poem which turned out more bawdy using other titles lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 11:26:00 PM
This is so beautiful, you must have planned this all this time!!! LOL
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Date: 6/11/2017 11:55:00 PM
I surprise myself sometimes Arthur !! I did the other titles poem which was somewhat bawdy but this is far superior in my mind so it had to be in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 10:50:00 AM
now, this emo side of you made me roll with goood goosebumps, jan!..fantastic!...huggs and miss ya!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/11/2017 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Nette 'm so glad you like it, I do surprise myself sometimes:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 8:07:00 AM
my dear friend jan....i Love how your talent just expands....heartbreak one day finds us all....but we must be strong enough to stand or surely fall....and falling is what i refuse....and to help me, your words here i will use....impressive jan....;)
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Eric, I do surprise folks with my different styles:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 7:48:00 AM
Hi Jan , emotional masterpiece , separation of souls :((( hugs
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:57:00 AM
aww thanks Niall I wish I could favourite this as I love the lines that much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 7:38:00 AM
It's beautiful in its own right, Jan. You've portrayed lost love and the healing of a heart in the most gracious of ways.
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Date: 6/11/2017 7:40:00 AM
That comment means alot to me, thank you so much Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 7:36:00 AM
- A very great poems, Jan - But, I'll be honest, my fav. is the one you wrote yesterday :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2017 7:48:00 AM
- You're right ... but humor is you, Jan :) - hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/11/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise - I love the other funny poem too but this one is my favourite as I think it suits the contest better than my bawdy humourous one:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 7:33:00 AM
Very Nice Jan...great titles came together nicely
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/11/2017 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Tim it is so so different to the bawdy titles I used for the other poem, I just hope LuLoo likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2017 7:30:00 AM
Wow, very nicely done Jan :) Good luck in the contest !
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Date: 6/11/2017 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Heidi I am absolutely delighted with the way this one came together ... all of the lines are genuine lines from my many poems:-) I wish I could favourite my own poems as this is one of them lol:-) hugs Jan xx