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Blossoms and Bubbles - a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

From aggregate supple stellar petals' smile, spring fragrance bubble spiral free in the air, their porcelain blossoms dash perfection flair; suitors bee, beguile the flower by buzzing style, the blooms' fingers rush to blushes beyond compare. Bard wind began to sing to serenade the buds in grins rosy petals breathe a gentle sigh, one long mile... Afar, some girls and boys see these Belles so rare-- they blow their dreams to root in land fertile. They hope like blossoms their dreams curve in peak though trials, struggles may round and round peep for soon as seasons rouse may their journey begin To the times their life drifts, avoiding not to weep These blossoms and bubbles psalm, wisdom speak O.E. Guillermo and J.A. Fraser 9:37 pm, March 03, 2015

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/27/2015 4:55:00 AM

I read this on the other side just here to fav it on this side too!

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Maurice, very kind of you, and it's much appreciated, James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2015 11:54:00 AM

Hi James! I read and commented about this beautiful co-write on Olive_eloi's post, but it's only fair that I visit yours as well to award you a top rating and wish you all the best. // paul

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thank you Paul, it's a pleasure seeing you here, James :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2015 8:39:00 AM

James, I already commented on Olive's page on this wonderfully written poem, you both did an amazing job, it is flawless, a perfect 7 and thanks so much for taking the time to visit my poem, rest now . . .

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 4:46:00 PM

Thank you kindly 'Broken Wings' for this, it's much appreciated, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/26/2015 3:29:00 AM

Dino James, weeeee I thought you will not dare to write this with me.. :) I thought that it is an easy subject but as we go on wahhhh you and I have a hard time.. :)! I really love blossoms and bubbles... :)! weeee! I had a great time writing this with you and thanks for the new words I am learning from you.. :D! teach me more... Warm hugs!xxx//olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 4/1/2015 1:54:00 PM

Oliz, daring with you and our writing is an absolute joy. This was a toughie, but we got there in the end. New words will continue for many a year, as I'll be learning your language of which I'm looking forward too...Warm hugs back!xxxDinoJamesxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2015 6:25:00 PM

So nice to see you two working together, JAmes. And that she was inspired to do a contest on this theme. What a lovely friend Olive has in you.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/25/2015 4:19:00 PM

such a lovely sonnet wonderful imagery Olive and James a great collaboration:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 4:41:00 PM

Thank you kindly Jan, always, hugs//James xx