Bliss

I sit back With my eyes gently closed Feeling the serene silence inside Pure bliss May.10.2022 Naani Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May Syllable count-20

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2022 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations, Valsa , on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/25/2022 9:25:00 AM

Zen-feeling. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/24/2022 11:55:00 AM

Ah, to be at one with oneself and the world Valsa in a moment of pure bliss to be enjoyed! Congratulations on your win!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 5/24/2022 5:43:00 AM

Your Naani was a bliss to read. Congratulations bon your winning placement.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/23/2022 7:32:00 PM

A happy space, Valsa! Congrats on your win

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/23/2022 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your imagery is meditative! :)Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/23/2022 3:06:00 PM

Congratulations, Valsa. I experience the same kind of bliss in silence. Loved your poem.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2022 1:12:00 PM

Back with, Congrats on your win, Valsa.

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2022 1:12:00 PM

Wonderful write Valsa,Congrats on your win

Valsa George
Date: 5/23/2022 10:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph for picking up my poem for a win .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2022 1:03:00 PM

so lovely . Congrats on the win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2022 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Bliss " is a wonderful write. Enjoy this win with blessings....................

Bill Baker

Date: 5/10/2022 8:53:00 PM

Meditation is so peaceful; a quiet soul is open to the spirit within. I enjoyed your poem, Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2022 7:08:00 PM

Beautiful moment encapsulated in your few words!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/10/2022 11:09:00 AM

"All is well!" Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2022 7:09:00 AM

Valsa, you've captured the essence of inner calm perfectly. All the best in the contest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/10/2022 4:46:00 AM

Well conveyed, Valsa--inner peace is pure bliss. Best to you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2022 2:19:00 AM

It certainly is Valsa, to sit their in total peace. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/10/2022 1:59:00 AM

It is a feeling I yearn for. Now I have to take antidepressants. Hugs.