Bleedin' Poetry

The ringmaster left 
but the carnival stayed in town.
Erect, proud, empowered people
stride by living the Crayola dream.
Awash in color, characters in the screenplay,
the scene played with aborigine like dream walkers.

No surface left to its utilitarian plight,
all stroked and stoked with the creativity
of the artist, all crooned to by boombox
and skateboard smack, or the concrete
slap of a mariachis’ feet.

The burnt bright white light shivers
to a Hendricks strum, and the caffeinated come
one by one hooked in to hook up,
to the juke boxes sixties twang.

Children play on Aztec snakes rising
from a soft foam of green with
mosaic skin and glass eyes
freed from the restrictions, the confines, 
the confounded, gay, straight, bi, free
bleeding poetry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Laan Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations Debbie:))
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations to you Debbie for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 7:15 AM
I loved this the first time I read it. Sensational writing, Deb. #1 in my books. Elaine
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 12:45 AM
ooowowwww, debbs.. i'd rate this as toppers! thumbs up for a gritty piece like this.. : ) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Congrats on your HM in Catie's contest with this excellent entry Debbie.. let us both enjoy our special honors with luv..
Calhoun Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Very entertaining, Deb. Congratulation's on your win in Catie's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Debbie,in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:18 PM
I can see itall so viividly, Deb. Thank you for sharingandmany congrat's on your win. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Chris, deborah,
Onclaud Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 9:25 AM
intrinsically designed, debs... a WOW for winning high in the contest! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:54 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful success in the free verse contest luv.. enjoy your chart topping win with luv...
Mannan Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 3:02 AM
So many amzing images weaved into this poem.Wow. many congrats for this win
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 1:18 AM
This entry is bleeding descriptiveness. Debbie, congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this presentation.
K. Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 10:34 PM
What a very interesting picture you give here, Debbie--just so alive! you capture so much in this poem-- super congrats on your win :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 8:58 AM
i like the way you set the stage to let me rrealize that in the end all bleed poetry! a real gem, debs!! :) hugggs, nette
Heckman Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:39 PM
this is an extraordinary poem. I love the symbolism. Thanks for the write. Julie
Horsman Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:59 PM
such imagery, what i call a 'New age poem' so vibrant so profound. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:57 PM
This sounds also like a place in SF? WAs it that place I saw pictures of? great imagery, dear. Well, I gotta scram and get to the gym. Thanks again for that win. LUv ya, andrea
Richards Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 4:07 PM
If I had not seen the photograph in your wonderful blog......I could still see what you saw.....amazing and such decriptive poetry!! Wonderful to accompany your photo journey! (PS.....I am so honored to have a 2nd in your Winter's Holy Days contest....I respect your poetry very much, and coming from you, it is indeed a thrill !! Thanks so much!!
Peranteau Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Ya should have slaped this write right on in there with that beautiful blog dear poet ! What a fantastic journey you led Noah and I through today; we thank you kindly Debbie ! much love, james
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Quite a visionary piece Debbie.. filled with super imagery and a different view in every verse.. happy u enjoyed a wonderful trip to see your son and your time spent there giving u brilliant ideas for writing as your trip to Egypt did..luv..
Kershaw Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:28 PM
I agree. Jack Kerouac said it best. "If you have to ask what it means, then you have failed. No poet would or could give answer. Love, Will
A  Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:40 PM
DEEP DEBORAH! I'M ALWAYS AMUSED ON HOW YOUR POETRY COMES TO LIVE WITH FULL IMAGE..~SKAT
Goff Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Hey Deb....finally gettin' 'round to responding to your comment on my "acrostic"..."JAMESY"..... the color yellow for me signifies hope...I collect yellow glass...and weave it into my indoor container gardens.....the reflections are healing for me.....so....this poem ends with inspiration! not despair!!!! jamie
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