Black Bird On a Wire Edited Version

Black Bird on a Wire

Black Bird
sitting on a wire
back turned towards me
Do you wish to hide the intelligence of your eyes
I see here at this old dump
picking through the unwanted wanted things
I wish I could search along with you
check out what the Jones's have no more use for
The bits of their unfixed
the not new enough
Their "I think we deserve the very best."
"This ain't good enough, let's buy more and more stuff!"
At one time
I wore their discarded garments without pride
I should have been proud
for I dug for them with my wanting hands
Hands that waded through 
their decadence
the refillable
the recyclable
their unused reusable

Black Bird
I watch you and your brothers
as you feasted on our last suppers
Ripping open black bags
fighting for morsels 
Unconcerned with the rotting
intoxicated by fermenting fruit
the pungent aromas
There are bones that need to be picked clean

I noticed but did not recall until now
the depth of my wanting
the hunger within
Back then
I was hoping 
praying for a bicycle
Desperately wanting to ride far away from here
so that I might escape my then
my embarrassment
my "I hope no one sees me!"
"Garbage picker!"
"Where did you get that coat?"
"We threw that in the dump!"
Boy oh boy do I like clothing now.
No one will ever again make fun of what I wear!

Part of me wishes to return with you Black Bird
to see what I have left behind
So that I can reclaim
and recycle that little boy
But I can't
The dumps aren't open anymore
It is like those old bones
bleached
picked clean
Manicured
Items placed in appropriate piles
All the while
you sit on your wire
back turned to me
Intelligent eyes hidden
knowing I can't disturb you
In a while you will feed on yesterday
for this place 
is not closed to you!

This piece grew out of my childhood experiences. We got our clothing from the dump and I still remember a girl saying to my sister " That's my coat, we threw that in the dump." I felt so bad for her and also for myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodgers Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Great poem and too true. I ws hiking with a self professed ercycler this summer and it is amazing what can be gleaned.
Gulley Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 1:47 PM
What a wonderful nostalgic write Richard. I so enjoyed looking back and remembering when. A fantastic write, the both of them. To hard to decide which one I liked the most so I chose both. : ) Congrats on your win in the contest and A Very Happy belated Birthday from me. I like the crows part in all of it too, they are cunning. Awesome, Sharon
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September 13, 2016 at 11:29 PM
RICHARD, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my blog "An Angels Tear" if you'd like. Smiles and Hugs..... LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Hi Linda, thanks for choosing this one. Hugs Rick.
Walker  Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Nice piece Richard. Enjoyed reading this thematic... Verlena
Vaso Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 8:29 PM
I quite enjoyed this, for fun I read the two poems side by side, I liked them both and it was fun to notice the subtle differences and changes in expression and form. Happy Birthday, and for those that would like to read his original, here is the link. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/black_bird_on_a_wire_677040
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Which did you prefer? Also thanks for the Birthday greetings Arthur. I hope you are having an enjoyable weekend.
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Just stopped back k to read this one again. Have a great birthday.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Tim.
Fleming Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 3:02 AM
A momentary observation that prompts you to put pen to paper, Richard. A fascinating poem - Top marks from me! My very best regards. :) john
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thanks my friend.
Wigley Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:07 PM
I don't think any of us really knew who we were, until we look back, and now we know. Too late? Maybe. A fine write, Richard, hugely impressive. Regards, Viv
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:14 AM
That is so true Viv.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 3:29 PM
This metaphoric write sinks in deep, piercing the core of other souls who have walked the same path and were caught in the same web! I can relate! Wonderfully written with insight and liberation. Excellent my friend! 7 :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thanks so much Connie.
Manassian Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Oh, Richard. How you pull at the heart strings with this write. If I could go back in time....Still, you are an amazing man in the here and now. The circumstances that shape us, make us stronger, wiser, and more compassionate. My heart goes out to the author of this piece. I'm SO busy with the new semester. I'll get back to writing soon...I hope. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Good morning Eileen, I'm looking forward to you being back. Hugs Rick. We finished our move so life should be a bit less hectic for the next little while.
Smith Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:03 PM
When we look back on perception of the past may change compared to when we were living in the moment. Excellent poem Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Tim.;0)
Turner Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Very deep write Richard. I had to read the explanation to understand what the blackbird represented. None of us would be who we are today if not for our past. I enjoyed the read immensely.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I agree. In the end I have no regrets.
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Great write, heart wrenching and thoughtful again I relate, parallel lives. I wonder who the black bird represents? I think I know! Thoroughly enjoyed this read, thanks for re-posting, never read it before.A7
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 3:39 PM
The blackbird represents the past in terms of what happened, the present in terms of trying to come to terms with the after effects of abuse and the future in terms of the shadow that the wings create which obscures the future.
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Wow very deep, thanks for the explanation.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 1:40 PM
The blackbird represents the past in terms of what happened, the present in terms of trying to come to terms with the after effects of abuse and the future in terms of the shadow that the wings create which obscures the future.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 9:05 AM
I found this so heartbreaking to read Richard especially as it is written retrospectivly. Sadly it is reality for many who would be grateful for our cast off's and scraps from our plate - we live in such a throwaway society your wonderful words open out eyes to the issues:-) hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Jan, this was an autobiographical piece.
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