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The Incredible You

Your tongue is a wand You words all magic Just pour a single spell Make me fly in the magical realm With the chirping of your infectious laugh Among the flowers of your caring limbs Just you and me in the center of Nowhere _________________. 27th May, 2022 Got 2nd position in Brian's PREMIER contest

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/25/2022 2:26:00 PM

Hi Paghunda, belated congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. The words sing and paint such a strong picture in the mind. Excellent work.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Vladislav

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2022 2:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Paghunda. Excellent love poem. Bill

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:31:00 AM

Thanks

Valsa George

Date: 6/24/2022 8:21:00 PM

What a deep romantic bonding.... just the two..of you- ! Your world is complete. .... nothing is amiss. Congratulations on your great win Paghunda...

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:31:00 AM

Thank you so much George

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/18/2022 8:10:00 PM

Amazing poetry, congratulation on your contest win.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:54:00 PM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2022 3:15:00 PM

so glad this won the contest. congrats to you.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:54:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/16/2022 5:02:00 AM

How so sweet! Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Paghunda. BIG congrats on your win.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:53:00 PM

Cheers

Valsa George

Date: 6/15/2022 8:40:00 PM

Beautifully romantic..... pulsating with admiration. Congratulations, Paghunda on your great win !

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Velsa

Susan Lawrence

Date: 6/15/2022 3:06:00 PM

Love this Paghunda ! Full and vibrant and alive . I love - just pour a single spell and your tongue is a wand ! Congratulations on your placement in the contest ! Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:50:00 PM

That's really great of you Lawrence

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2022 2:47:00 PM

Words, if sincerely spoken, can certainly be magical, Paghunda. This poem is lovely and romantic. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:50:00 PM

Thanks Paul