The Incredible You

Your tongue is a wand
You words all magic
Just pour a single spell
Make me fly in the magical realm
With the chirping of your infectious laugh
Among the flowers of your caring limbs
Just you and me in the center of Nowhere 

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27th May, 2022




Got 2nd position in Brian's PREMIER contest

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Date: 7/25/2022 2:26:00 PM
Hi Paghunda, belated congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. The words sing and paint such a strong picture in the mind. Excellent work.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Vladislav
Date: 7/25/2022 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Paghunda. Excellent love poem. Bill
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 6/24/2022 8:21:00 PM
What a deep romantic bonding.... just the two..of you- ! Your world is complete. .... nothing is amiss. Congratulations on your great win Paghunda...
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/26/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much George
Date: 6/18/2022 8:10:00 PM
Amazing poetry, congratulation on your contest win.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:54:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/18/2022 3:15:00 PM
so glad this won the contest. congrats to you.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 6/16/2022 5:02:00 AM
How so sweet! Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Paghunda. BIG congrats on your win.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:53:00 PM
Cheers
Date: 6/15/2022 8:40:00 PM
Beautifully romantic..... pulsating with admiration. Congratulations, Paghunda on your great win !
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Velsa
Date: 6/15/2022 3:06:00 PM
Love this Paghunda ! Full and vibrant and alive . I love - just pour a single spell and your tongue is a wand ! Congratulations on your placement in the contest ! Susan :)
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:50:00 PM
That's really great of you Lawrence
Date: 6/15/2022 2:47:00 PM
Words, if sincerely spoken, can certainly be magical, Paghunda. This poem is lovely and romantic. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:50:00 PM
Thanks Paul
Date: 6/15/2022 9:31:00 AM
Great imagination. Loved your poem.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/20/2022 7:50:00 PM
My pleasure
Date: 5/31/2022 9:31:00 AM
Your poem lets imagination fly. Congratulations on your podium win my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/1/2022 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Marcum
Date: 5/31/2022 3:39:00 AM
"chirping of your infectious laugh" - Wow! Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/1/2022 4:54:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/27/2022 9:45:00 PM
That's so cute... Lovely write... Enjoyed reading it...
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/1/2022 4:55:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 5/27/2022 9:45:00 AM
oh this is precious!!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/1/2022 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
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