The Incredible You

Your tongue is a wand
You words all magic
Just pour a single spell
Make me fly in the magical realm
With the chirping of your infectious laugh
Among the flowers of your caring limbs
Just you and me in the center of Nowhere 

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27th May, 2022




Got 2nd position in Brian's PREMIER contest
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Raven Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Hi Paghunda, belated congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. The words sing and paint such a strong picture in the mind. Excellent work.
Zahid Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Thank you Vladislav
Baker Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations on your win, Paghunda. Excellent love poem. Bill
Zahid Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thanks
George Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 8:21 PM
What a deep romantic bonding.... just the two..of you- ! Your world is complete. .... nothing is amiss. Congratulations on your great win Paghunda...
Zahid Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thank you so much George
Horsman Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 8:10 PM
Amazing poetry, congratulation on your contest win.
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:54 PM
Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 3:15 PM
so glad this won the contest. congrats to you.
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:54 PM
Thank you Andrea
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:02 AM
How so sweet! Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Paghunda. BIG congrats on your win.
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:53 PM
Cheers
George Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 8:40 PM
Beautifully romantic..... pulsating with admiration. Congratulations, Paghunda on your great win !
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:53 PM
Thank you Velsa
Lawrence Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Love this Paghunda ! Full and vibrant and alive . I love - just pour a single spell and your tongue is a wand ! Congratulations on your placement in the contest ! Susan :)
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:50 PM
That's really great of you Lawrence
Callus Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 2:47 PM
Words, if sincerely spoken, can certainly be magical, Paghunda. This poem is lovely and romantic. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:50 PM
Thanks Paul
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Great imagination. Loved your poem.
Zahid Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:50 PM
My pleasure
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Your poem lets imagination fly. Congratulations on your podium win my friend. Blessings xxoo
Zahid Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 4:54 AM
Thanks Marcum
Alex Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 3:39 AM
"chirping of your infectious laugh" - Wow! Beautiful. Congratulations!
Zahid Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 4:54 AM
Thank you
Kannan Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 9:45 PM
That's so cute... Lovely write... Enjoyed reading it...
Zahid Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 9:45 AM
oh this is precious!!
Zahid Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Thank you Andrea
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