Birthdays Come

Birthdays come
but never go...

the age remains

as candles less glow;

the cake retains
a waist will show...

(hopefully, there is equal
love to know) – 


Though a life can be measured
by girth in inches; as a horse often measured
by hands and cinches – 

and by trophies, above the mantel – 
with a champion saddle, having a silver signed
cantle – 

But the sum of man's darkness, Heaven's 
record of all, will determine if a generation
to rise or fall

whether angels near us scatter or rally

for our God keeps, a righteous tally....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 8:47 PM
I like the way you turned a birthday into a treatise on the future of mankind, Joe. Craftsmanlike penning here. :) gw
DiMino Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Hi Gershon; I always seem to lean toward the Universal, but it was a peaceful birthday. Nice meal, good music -- just the wife and I.
Deo Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Happy Birthday Father DeMino. Your tally will bring joy in God's eye, and glow of the splendid moon on Jesus's face. But tarry, delay tally. We love you Joe, to U none is low, around U, we all grow. Amen, shalom shalom in health, Tru Wealth
DiMino Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Anil; it was a quiet but very nice birthday. I am in good health, and that is a blessing.
Romios Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Prince de Mino, well written Poem contains much truth! Indeed, “ god keeps a rightous tally”. Yours, Pangie
DiMino Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Can't fool God. He knows everything about us...including all that we, ourselves, are yet to find out. Thank you so much, my friend. Blessings.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 11:45 AM
This poem is so uniquely you Joe. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
DiMino Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Connie; that is such a nice thing to say to me. Precious comment...as we are all striving to be somewhat unique in our own way. Blessings!
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