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Birthdays Come

Birthdays come but never go... the age remains as candles less glow; the cake retains a waist will show... (hopefully, there is equal love to know) – Though a life can be measured by girth in inches; as a horse often measured by hands and cinches – and by trophies, above the mantel – with a champion saddle, having a silver signed cantle – But the sum of man's darkness, Heaven's record of all, will determine if a generation to rise or fall whether angels near us scatter or rally for our God keeps, a righteous tally....

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Date: 4/30/2022 8:47:00 PM
I like the way you turned a birthday into a treatise on the future of mankind, Joe. Craftsmanlike penning here. :) gw
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/1/2022 1:23:00 PM
Hi Gershon; I always seem to lean toward the Universal, but it was a peaceful birthday. Nice meal, good music -- just the wife and I.
Date: 4/29/2022 12:53:00 PM
Happy Birthday Father DeMino. Your tally will bring joy in God's eye, and glow of the splendid moon on Jesus's face. But tarry, delay tally. We love you Joe, to U none is low, around U, we all grow. Amen, shalom shalom in health, Tru Wealth
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/29/2022 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Anil; it was a quiet but very nice birthday. I am in good health, and that is a blessing.
Date: 4/29/2022 12:39:00 PM
Prince de Mino, well written Poem contains much truth! Indeed, “ god keeps a rightous tally”. Yours, Pangie
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/29/2022 7:47:00 PM
Can't fool God. He knows everything about us...including all that we, ourselves, are yet to find out. Thank you so much, my friend. Blessings.
Date: 4/29/2022 11:45:00 AM
This poem is so uniquely you Joe. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/29/2022 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Connie; that is such a nice thing to say to me. Precious comment...as we are all striving to be somewhat unique in our own way. Blessings!

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