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Bird Damsels

Bird youths that sang to amuse bird damsels that tossed their heads, balancing their legs to violins' tune, have left me, in rising darkness. Nov. 30, 2020 Liberum Divisa 3 Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Gregory R Barden Original poem: “Waves of loneliness” Posted on Nov. 29, 2020 for the contest: UN-RHY-ME Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/18/2021 2:12:00 PM
Newton, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines, nice image too _Constance
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Date: 2/18/2021 4:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for this impressively sweet comment and the congrats!!
Date: 2/17/2021 9:43:00 PM
Very creative with wonderful imagery Newton. Congrats on your win. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 2/18/2021 2:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anitha, for the read, lovely comment and the congrats!!
Date: 2/17/2021 9:16:00 AM
Nature is a constant Muse. Love your memories weaving words. Congratulations, SuZ
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Date: 2/17/2021 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Suzanne, for the impressively sweet comment and the congrats!!
Date: 2/17/2021 6:56:00 AM
Interesting winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 2/17/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for the sweet comment and the congrats!!
Date: 2/17/2021 6:44:00 AM
lovely, Newton ~ congrats
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Date: 2/17/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line, for the lovely comment and the congrats!!
Date: 2/17/2021 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Newton! Linda
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda, for the congrats!!
Date: 2/17/2021 5:02:00 AM
Nice show Newton...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Carol, for the sweet comment and the congrats!!
Date: 12/2/2020 8:01:00 AM
Creative work. Enjoyed reading this one. Don't know if it has been judged or not. Leaving me with questions. Sara
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Date: 12/2/2020 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this impressively sweet comment!! Sure, this contest has not yet been judged. A great day for you!!

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