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bird and cherry

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2025 4:13:00 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go. Sara K

Paul Callus

Date: 7/5/2025 3:31:00 PM

Congratulations on placing tops with this delightful offering, Andrea. Making that bird/cherry form certainly wasn't easy!! ~ regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:23:00 AM

Thanks , Paul. It didn't use to be a shape poems but I turned it into one. It is one of my favorite ku's

Len Gasun

Date: 7/4/2025 8:37:00 PM

Oh, I love this. Gorgeous my dear poet friend. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on your first place win! Hugs and cheers!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:24:00 AM

Thanks, dear friend

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2025 6:40:00 PM

'cherry' sure dear poet. Congratulations on your win, cheers!!!

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/2/2025 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea! Xo

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2025 9:25:00 AM

Wow. I was wondering how to make a haiku into a shape. Congratulations

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/2/2025 7:04:00 AM

Lovely - so beautiful! Congratulations Andrea! :)

Trina Layne

Date: 7/2/2025 5:07:00 AM

Excellent entry! Congrats on your work!

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/1/2025 10:48:00 PM

Is the word magnificent in order? Yes it is Congratulations to you on your win with this creative work Howard

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:24:00 AM

Thanks so much

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2025 9:38:00 PM

I am waiting to see the robin come and peck at the gliding cherry. Congratulations Andrea on your great win.

JCB Brul

Date: 7/1/2025 8:29:00 PM

Lovely! I forgot i commented on this before when not yet shaped. Congratulations!^___^ JCB

Karen Jones

Date: 7/1/2025 6:56:00 PM

Cool beans! Congratulations on your top win!

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2021 8:15:00 PM

lovely imagery, Andrea ~ congrats on your podium finish

JCB Brul

Date: 1/28/2021 12:24:00 PM

Back to fave this piece of marvel...i love this cute haiku..

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:25:00 AM

Thanks!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/27/2021 2:11:00 PM

What wonders one can do with such few words and syllables! Good work.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:25:00 AM

Thanks, Robert

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/26/2021 8:58:00 PM

Superb! Congrats on your win!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2021 7:59:00 PM

I knew this was headed for glory. Congrats on your podium win, Andrea. That last line is just such a stunner! Bravo, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:26:00 AM

Thanks so much

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/26/2021 6:19:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your Moment In Nature win with that stunning work. I’m absolutely delighted for you. Your comment on Hypnotic Aural Guru is really appreciated. Many thanks Howard

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/6/2025 10:26:00 AM

Thanks, Howard

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/26/2021 4:59:00 PM

So beautiful a picture Andrea. Congratulations on the win! Linda

JCB Brul

Date: 1/26/2021 4:25:00 PM

Wow...such a cute scenario ...Great haiku!!!Congratulations on your awesome win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/26/2021 3:15:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis