Beseeching Death

Oh, death malevolent!
The taker of us all before our time,
you grimly reap a myriad of souls,
cruelly stealing many in their prime,
and countless young and innocent
have you whisked ruthlessly away!
Oh, death Malevolent!
Why this utter heartlessness that you display?

Oh, horrifying death!
When young, I read of you in Revelations.
Your nature so atrocious
filled my tender heart with trepidation -
thinking of humanity's travails
the many painful ways to die.
Oh, horrifying death!
What good is it to even ask you why?

Oh, death omnipotent.
to the yang of life, you are the yin.
Your power cannot be withstood.
Everyone you call upon must let you in.
A higher and mysterious law you answer to
and fighting against you, we all are powerless.
Oh, death omnipotent!
when did I begin to fear you less?

Oh, unbiased death!
Whether you be torturous or kind;
whether you be swift or slow;
no man or woman will be left behind.
You serve a God of justice and of truth,
and, I'm told, a God of mercy too.
Oh, unbiased death!
Can I grow in faith, knowing you're the path to something new?

Oh, welcomed death!
When our friends and family have passed on;
when grief engulfs the soul;
when youth's abilities are all but gone;
when life seems somehow more than we can bear;
you come along to bring us sweet release.
Oh, welcomed death!
Are you thanked enough for bringing us to peace?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Godwin Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 11:29 PM
Very well written, excellent depth and drama throughout ending with a great twist. Impressive write, Andrea. LOVE CayCay
Walker Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Oh, such powerful words that brings insight about death.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 4:38 AM
Falling in love with death after reading this fine poetry of yours Andrea! Congrats on big win!
A  Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 11:56 PM
ANDREA, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
Sietesantos Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Powerful and profound, Andrea! This is such an insightful piece personifying death and its inevitability - no one is exempt when it is his or her turn! Congratulations on another well-deserved win, my friend! Pandita
Mandani Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 10:08 AM
When you started...I was thinking, oh man, her views are exactly opposite of mine. But then, it looked like you compromised and accepted death as an absolute reality. We have no choice, have we? Death is our only buddy!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 9:50 AM
powerful. strikes-through. BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa
Nunez Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 9:25 AM
An impassioned and eloquent write, Andie! Very dramatic. Congratulations on your win!
Poet Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:44 PM
Another of my Fav poem...one of your best work!
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Wonderful Andie! a slow and gentle dawning. Great win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea in Paula Swanson's contest "Beseech". Love, Carol
Fahey Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 6:53 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win with this beauty! Ellen <3
Horne Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Many congratulations, Andrea : )
George   Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Death 'The Euqalizer'. Magnificent writing as always, Andrea. Many congrats on your SENSATION WIN. Love, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 12:55 AM
Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in Beseech contest with this terrific write my friend..enjoy with luv..
Johnson Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 11:17 PM
A great poem Andrea and a way of looking at death that I would never have thought of. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Poet Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 10:06 PM
Andrea ,I think this is one of the best poems you have penned ever.Congratulations on your 3rd place win---kash
Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 4:12 AM
Terrific poetry Andrea, most definately on the podium at the winners party.....:)
Culverhouse Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 9:34 AM
I finished swamp thing if you care to read it....
Babcock Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Something we do not want to think about is death or at least I don't want too. You wrote an excellent poem on this dark subject. love phyl
Aul Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:12 AM
What a great write for this contest.......George
Austin Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Death, the traveler. Just a stop along the wheel. This is what millions believe. J.S. Bach wrote Kum Susser Tod. (Come Sweet Death) This is what I believe too. LOve this one, Andrea. Love, daver
K. Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 10:51 PM
okidoki sweetie :) good night to you & sweet dreams :)
Maverick Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Such a worthwhile piece here Andrea all things work to the good for those who are in Christ Jesus.
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