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Beseeching Death

Oh, death malevolent! The taker of us all before our time, you grimly reap a myriad of souls, cruelly stealing many in their prime, and countless young and innocent have you whisked ruthlessly away! Oh, death Malevolent! Why this utter heartlessness that you display? Oh, horrifying death! When young, I read of you in Revelations. Your nature so atrocious filled my tender heart with trepidation - thinking of humanity's travails the many painful ways to die. Oh, horrifying death! What good is it to even ask you why? Oh, death omnipotent. to the yang of life, you are the yin. Your power cannot be withstood. Everyone you call upon must let you in. A higher and mysterious law you answer to and fighting against you, we all are powerless. Oh, death omnipotent! when did I begin to fear you less? Oh, unbiased death! Whether you be torturous or kind; whether you be swift or slow; no man or woman will be left behind. You serve a God of justice and of truth, and, I'm told, a God of mercy too. Oh, unbiased death! Can I grow in faith, knowing you're the path to something new? Oh, welcomed death! When our friends and family have passed on; when grief engulfs the soul; when youth's abilities are all but gone; when life seems somehow more than we can bear; you come along to bring us sweet release. Oh, welcomed death! Are you thanked enough for bringing us to peace?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/3/2015 9:12:00 AM
Oh, such powerful words that brings insight about death.
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Date: 7/1/2015 4:38:00 AM
Falling in love with death after reading this fine poetry of yours Andrea! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 6/30/2015 11:56:00 PM
ANDREA, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:11:00 PM
Powerful and profound, Andrea! This is such an insightful piece personifying death and its inevitability - no one is exempt when it is his or her turn! Congratulations on another well-deserved win, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:08:00 AM
When you started...I was thinking, oh man, her views are exactly opposite of mine. But then, it looked like you compromised and accepted death as an absolute reality. We have no choice, have we? Death is our only buddy!
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:50:00 AM
powerful. strikes-through. BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:25:00 AM
An impassioned and eloquent write, Andie! Very dramatic. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:44:00 PM
Another of my Fav poem...one of your best work!
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/18/2011 2:06:00 PM
Wonderful Andie! a slow and gentle dawning. Great win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/18/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea in Paula Swanson's contest "Beseech". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:53:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win with this beauty! Ellen <3
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:26:00 AM
Many congratulations, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:29:00 AM
Death 'The Euqalizer'. Magnificent writing as always, Andrea. Many congrats on your SENSATION WIN. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:55:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in Beseech contest with this terrific write my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:17:00 PM
A great poem Andrea and a way of looking at death that I would never have thought of. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:06:00 PM
Andrea ,I think this is one of the best poems you have penned ever.Congratulations on your 3rd place win---kash
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:12:00 AM
Terrific poetry Andrea, most definately on the podium at the winners party.....:)
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:34:00 AM
I finished swamp thing if you care to read it....
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:56:00 AM
Something we do not want to think about is death or at least I don't want too. You wrote an excellent poem on this dark subject. love phyl
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:12:00 AM
What a great write for this contest.......George
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:45:00 AM
Death, the traveler. Just a stop along the wheel. This is what millions believe. J.S. Bach wrote Kum Susser Tod. (Come Sweet Death) This is what I believe too. LOve this one, Andrea. Love, daver
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:51:00 PM
okidoki sweetie :) good night to you & sweet dreams :)
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:08:00 PM
Such a worthwhile piece here Andrea all things work to the good for those who are in Christ Jesus.
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Date: 4/5/2011 6:38:00 AM
sad yet death is just the beginning to believers.....will be cool.
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