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Below the Surface

From a tear drop high in the clouds, Slowly decending to meet your end in the sea... Journying past rocky beaches and high canyon walls; quiet hidden places. Always keeping secrets below your ever changing face. Flow, river, flow, and send your message to those who look into your depths. For Brian's contest

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Date: 1/7/2010 10:37:00 AM
Completely AWESOME!, Barbara. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/5/2010 3:55:00 AM
Thank you for sharing you wonderful poetry with us today Barbara. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. I wish you the best in Brian's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2010 4:53:00 PM
beautiful entry in the contest, good luck!!
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Date: 1/3/2010 10:27:00 PM
Wonderful write BG, nice imagery and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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