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Being With Him

his voice whispering my name beloved hands touching me during these precious moments nothing else matters...

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 1:37:00 PM

Hello Barbara, Congratulations on your win, your words are so true. This is beautiful and stunning. As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 4:23:00 PM

Barbara~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:32:00 PM

This is just wonderful. I'd put it even higher! Congratulations, Barbara, Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 9:39:00 AM

That is so true Barbara, congratulations to you on your win ;-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:16:00 AM

Congrats BG on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win .. enjoy with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 6:11:00 AM

Congrats BG !! and thanks for supporting my contest...luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 6:08:00 AM

Hi Barbara - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 6:14:00 PM

This is very tender and romantic, Barbara! LUv, Andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/3/2011 6:43:00 PM

i dont know what to say. except keep him. john

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/3/2011 6:28:00 PM

It appears you were giving a vivid description of a good time with this entry. This work looks like a good contender for the contest.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 4:56:00 PM

Truer words were never spoken, a fine entry! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/3/2011 4:53:00 PM

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm ........nice.......... :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2011 4:15:00 PM

Great one..If for the contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Sara