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Before my flowing, poetic pen is hushed in Quietus, And I have reached my journey's end with folded hands; Departed into my dreamless sleep beneath violets, Let me write one everlasting, eternal, immortal verse; Of the ravaged garden of my life. I want to hear a bird song when I quietly glide away, With a sigh, I will lay my pale form down peacefully; I have willed my Keepsakes and my musing poems, The Angel of death, will take my hand into another realm; And the drums of time will cease. Oh, it has been a life full of happiness entwined with sad, I have travelled many different roads to get to Tranquillity; The chapters of my life are full of the dead and undead, Memories of childhood, family, friends and pets I loved; The scars of life stab my soul. I do not fear death and I am ready to go through the gate, But I will miss nature, the woods and the waters moving; And as I walk the silent passage alone to my eternal night, Think of me as being set free and soaring high up above; I lived a life weather-stained with tears. Leaving life is something we all must do; it is written, I was held by a thread in this earthly realm until that last gasp; Now, all I know is the peacefulness of a leafy tree above, Drifting blue clouds and rain falling gently on my resting place; I was a shadow on the wall of time. Do not weep over my eternal grave heartbroken my dears, I have followed the beautiful Angels footsteps to heaven; My poetry is timeless, ageless, and will always remain, I have shed this earth bound life and I am a butterfly set free; I drank from the deep blue cup of life. So come, dear hearts and plant some pretty flowers in Spring, I am at last united with all my beloved who have gone before; Touch my name and remember me for my beauty, And although my life was but a whisper, I loved every moment; Now, I exist in another realm. ____________________ August 26, 2015 Poetry/Epic/Before My Pen Is Hushed Copyright Protected, ID 15-703-937-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the Premiere Contest Number Five Sponsor, A Skat Tenth Place

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Date: 7/30/2016 1:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend. Hugs, Cloudy Poet
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Date: 7/28/2016 10:43:00 PM
One of my favorites, B. W. Interesting use of the word, quietus (had to look it up, of course). You say, "The chapters of my life are full of the dead and undead," Are we talking vampires, here? ;-) Congrats!
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Date: 7/28/2016 9:58:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win in my "Premiere Contest." Enjoy the few words I left on my blog. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 9/1/2015 11:49:00 PM
Broken,, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 5:05:00 PM
What a touchy poem! I like every line. Congratulations, Broken Wings. I was late or mistaken, I thought that was 25/9. But I wrote a poem about the same topic "Full Stop".
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Date: 8/30/2015 10:22:00 PM
One of your best broken! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/29/2015 8:59:00 PM
Oh my goodness, Constance, this is so sublime. I have to tell you how shocked I am to have gotten on the list and to have placed high because you know, I put that challenge off till the very last minute. but once I started doing it, it almost flowed and I was thinking it was no so great, but I am really glad Silent One liked it. Getting back to YOUR poem, I think it has more "flair" to it than mine. It is very poetic, just like YOU are. It's a treasure. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:36:00 PM
As always, your pen amazes me...beautiful words weaved in a wonderful display...grats on your win!
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Date: 8/28/2015 7:07:00 PM
This is a real gem Broken wings, I love the message and flow, Just mesmerizing is all i can say, blessings Carl
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Date: 8/28/2015 3:30:00 PM
Hey Broken Wings, stopped by for a visit. This is a lovely work of art from you (as usual). So beautifully expressed and the imagery carries the soul into the light with you. I love it. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 8/27/2015 8:41:00 PM
She was firece beauty, and total poetry...a strong, faithful poem of peace and courage Wings of Fire...J.A.B.
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Date: 8/27/2015 1:15:00 PM
So beautifully written!!! Will long remember this poem, Constance.
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Date: 8/27/2015 11:43:00 AM
WOW, that is deep Broken, the way you enter each and every page's amazing... I truly love how you plant the imagery here.. Spiritual and real.... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2015 8:08:00 AM
Another deep sensitive sentiment from our sweet Anishinaabe Princess.
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Date: 8/27/2015 6:51:00 AM
Wow...I'm so glad I chanced upon this beautiful piece...awesome!!
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Date: 8/27/2015 3:58:00 AM
Broken Wings, wow captivating and beautifully written from the heart!!! il fave it!!! touching!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 8/27/2015 3:11:00 AM
This is so beautiful that I only wish that we will meet in that other realm to compare our poetry notes. Thanks for your comments on my work...they are much appreciated.
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:13:00 PM
as you take that final step....no sad tears will be wept....because the way I know your heart....lets me know Heaven is definitely on your chart.....;)
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Date: 8/26/2015 8:52:00 PM
Very nice, wonderful effort. Really enjoyed. Flowed very well. Excellent content.
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