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Before Bed

this twinkling time after I'm done with my day pour it in haiku
Written: April 22, 2022 1st place contest winner A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/26/2022 12:40:00 PM
I love your poem, Haiku is definitely my favourite form. Nicely penned.
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:43:00 AM
Hello Scott - This is very lovely. It very much has imagery. Thank you for sharing with us all this unique format which has a life voice and tone all its own. Enjoy the day and poetrysoup. Take care
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Date: 4/25/2022 9:22:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet friend on your honorable win in Brian's contest !
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Date: 4/25/2022 7:10:00 PM
"Pour in haiku" - Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/24/2022 8:01:00 PM
This reads like a sweet dessert after dinner .....!
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Date: 4/23/2022 2:02:00 PM
A short poem before bed. Love the first line!
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Date: 4/23/2022 4:43:00 AM
And your muse shines in this poem. perfectly captured.
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Date: 4/23/2022 12:05:00 AM
Twinkling time….that is so sweet Lasaad. Debx
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Date: 4/22/2022 10:50:00 PM
Can't help it when the muse attacks at bedtime.
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:27:00 PM
Sweet. I just did that too. Goodnight :)
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