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Beauty of Mystery

subdued in hushed memory wandering through the hollow's silent breeze searching the mid-night fortitudes silver stars stand glistening a tattered landscape of beauty and still a hunger unfed a sanctification only of the spirit immersed of shallow breath encapsulated in a calm essence the frozen scape spilling free a scent of pristine majesty the dawn unlatched of poetry beauty slowly crawling in a breath each star fades away goodbye mysterious silence as morning birds flutter and sing... Contest-SEEING BEAUTY IN IMPERFECTION 11-28-2013 Poet- Rick Parise

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/18/2013 4:06:00 PM

Congratulations Rick, evocative scenes..'

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/18/2013 7:05:00 AM

enjoyed this Rick congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2013 9:52:00 PM

wonderful win....PD

Donna Jones

Date: 12/17/2013 6:39:00 PM

This gave me a very peaceful feeling...beautiful...congratulations on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2013 10:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the: "SEEING BEAUTY..." contest, Rick. - A pleasure to read your poem and a pleasure to take part. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2013 8:31:00 AM

A joy to read your poem on seeing the beauty in imperfection and congratulations on the win, Rick

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/4/2013 1:43:00 PM

This is beautiful and if for a contest should place high. I am sending a request from Karen O'Leary, by Soupmail. Joyce

Constance La France

Date: 12/3/2013 2:31:00 PM

Rick, this is a beautiful poem for the contest and I also want to thank you for my wonderful placement in your Trickle Down Contest, I am so honoured,

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2013 9:39:00 PM

Enjoyed the beauty in imperfection, Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2013 1:58:00 PM

wow, Rick.... nice seeing you write a sensual poem for the contest. enjoyed the complete feeling. ..good luck, and happy thanksgiving. ..luv...Linda

Rick Parise
Date: 11/28/2013 2:05:00 PM

Hey You..............Thankx -. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.......