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Deep in a forest a river flows and there floats Ophelia, in death- There is a deep silence, a hush and beauty in the landscape, deep green water grass and drifting jade moss so soft and delicate like satin it seems- The water is dark and deep and sinister yet the scene is one of peace- Foliage lush and overgrown hangs over the river and an old tree leans into the water and growing everywhere are yellow buttercups purple nettle and white daisies- Ophelia holds a bouquet in one hand the other she holds up where once flowers she held the colorful blooms represent beauty and immortality- Her rich brocade dress is sodden and heavy now and her beautiful face sees only heaven- Oh, my painters hand wants to continue to paint the beautiful decaying and ever blooming forest oh, over here more ferns . . . more red poppies.. some purple, some white more, more, more- My hand is an extension of my mind, I have lost control, time is nothing, time is suspended and I paint . . . and my pseudo shall be Beauty- _______________________________ June 19, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/Beauty Copyright Protected, ID 17-1224-850-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Strand Select L sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 2/14/2020 10:06:00 AM
What a rich deep portrait you paint, Constance. Lovely. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/14/2020 5:39:00 PM
Line, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 2/12/2020 2:58:00 PM
A great win, poem and picture. Have a wonderful day.............
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Date: 2/12/2020 5:00:00 PM
Paula, thanks so much for the visit and sweet comment_Constance
Date: 2/11/2020 2:28:00 PM
- Really beautifully described, Constance - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2020 5:01:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the compliment and hugs _Constance
Date: 2/11/2020 11:14:00 AM
What a rich canvas you paint, love the imagery of Ophelia holding the bouquet-
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:16:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for visiting and for the compliment _Constance

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