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Be Quiet

Be quiet Betrayal was so evident in your eyes, Once shimmered bright in my passion, Words could not say so I chose to be quiet ! Waves that once giggled and created melody, Humming of the bees flutter of butterflies, Everything stood still, I chose to be quiet ! Followed you everywhere with my heartbeats, That now no longer beat, Emotions that swayed to the tune of love, Flowed and flooded now have dried ! Burning desires reduced to ashes, No smoke seen not a cry, Could you perceive my cravings in angst, and assure me, A quantum of trust Why I chose to be quiet ? Written July 30th , 2015 For contest "Time to B" by Casarah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/31/2015 10:08:00 AM
Very well done, Dr. Sharma!! :O) Congrats on your win ^_^
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Date: 7/31/2015 8:53:00 AM
Well expressed Upma, congratulations.
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Date: 7/31/2015 7:42:00 AM
Oh wow, what a story! Thanks for sharing!! you are a powerful storyteller!
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Date: 7/31/2015 1:22:00 AM
Congrats... SK
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Date: 7/31/2015 12:35:00 AM
That must have taken some self control, Dr Upma, because you strike me as the kind of person who would let him know how you feel in no uncertain terms. Ok, I'll be quiet. Congrats, Viv x
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Date: 7/31/2015 12:24:00 AM
WOW!!! Such depth of emotion and beauty in this piece, Dr Upma....I'm touched by the content of this piece. You are very eloquent...even when silent. Hugs
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:37:00 PM
Deep and emotional. Excellent!
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:39:00 AM
That's a powerful poem, and I wish you well for it in the forthcoming contest, Upma. Julia, xx
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