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Oh how I love you, love you with all of my heart and all my soul. And there is not a day that I do not thank God for this love that grew. You are the air that I breathe, my thoughts as I lay in bed until that midnight hour. Then, you come to me, my sweet, sweet man of love. Oh, I float and I am lost in your embrace, your kisses, and lips, lips. * Darling, you are my everything and my reason for being, and when I said I do, to you it was forever and evermore; Remember how the snow was falling on our wedding day, with the sleigh carriage waiting and those beautiful horses. We danced the night away until the stroke of midnight, and then we left our loved ones behind to start a new life: as man and wife- in a forest log cabin with the fire glowing you showed me your love and that is the gift I hold close. This Valentine I will come to you darling through the snow, yes, to that place where my love lays in his eternal rest; I will bring him a Valentine red rose and lay it in on his tomb, and I know at midnight- he will come drifting to be with me. ________________________ January 23, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Be My Valentine Copyright Protected, ID 19-1107-465-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Midnight Valentine sponsor, Chantelle Ann Cook First Place

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Date: 2/5/2019 3:10:00 PM
wowowow, Constance! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/8/2019 8:06:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the wow and congratulations ~
Date: 2/4/2019 7:53:00 AM
Beautifully done Constance, full of heart, and then some <3 Congratulations on your brilliant top win. xomo
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Date: 2/8/2019 8:06:00 AM
Maureen, thanks for the beautiful and brilliant and congratulations ~
Date: 2/3/2019 11:09:00 PM
Very sweet!
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Date: 2/8/2019 8:06:00 AM
Mark, thanks for the sweet and the visit !
Date: 2/3/2019 10:56:00 PM
Wishing you much-deserved congratulations on your first place win!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2019 8:07:00 AM
Michelle, thanks for the congratulations !
Date: 1/24/2019 2:16:00 PM
The heart shape is striking, then the reveal at the end so tragic, this seems to be a love that lives eternal-
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2019 3:14:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ~

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