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Bay-Watch Christmas Eve

In the fog, Rudolph led Santa’s sleigh, but his Covid mask got in the way. The red glow of his nose was concealed. Oh, what woes when he landed them all in a bay. Dec. 7, 2020 for Carolyn Devonshire's Santa's Covid Christmas Poetry Contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/22/2020 12:16:00 PM

Rudolph could have got a dispensation not to wear the mask over his nose lol! He needed a "headlight" to see where he was going:) Congratulations on your high placement, Andrea! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2020 11:35:00 AM

- Sends you a congratulations for your win in Santa's Covid Christmas contest, Andrea :) - Have a wonderful Christmas ... and a virus-free new year 2021 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans

Date: 12/21/2020 8:45:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Merry Christmas!

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/21/2020 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas my friend!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2020 5:28:00 PM

This is a great limerick. CONGRATS on your win, Andrea! Janice

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/20/2020 4:36:00 PM

Delightful and witty lim, Andrea! Congrats and I'm honored to share 2d place with you. A Very Merry Christmas and a Happy and Healthy New Year - Bob H

Joseph May

Date: 12/20/2020 7:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Joanna Feltham

Date: 12/20/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thank goodness he landed safely. Congratulations on your winning placement. Merry Christmas.

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/19/2020 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your placement!! Thank you for the smile!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/19/2020 2:22:00 PM

Oh, my! I hope Santa's reindeer get hazard pay. Would not want to see them end up in a bay. Great poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your win and have a very Merry Christmas. Hugs, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 12/10/2020 12:31:00 PM

LOL, a great one for the contest here, my friend

John Watt

Date: 12/10/2020 10:45:00 AM

Very cute limerick, my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 12/10/2020 4:36:00 AM

Nicely done Andrea... a splash landing!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/9/2020 10:51:00 AM

So much fun to read, because of the sarcastic TRUTH in it Andrea!

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/9/2020 8:54:00 AM

I’m thinking reindeer can swim, but old Santa I’d be worried about him

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 12/8/2020 8:23:00 PM

This is an excellent limerick poem, my sister of God's grace, Andrea. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely. The theme great, and tenor move the piece along with much grace. Great job! https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/8/2020 12:11:00 PM

Well said, as it is a challenge for us old folk to descend the stairs wearing a face mask! But you have certainly sunk holiday expectations! Aloha! Rico