Home » Poems » Jan Allison » Bathing Beauty

Jan Allison | + Follow Poet |

Bathing Beauty

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Jan Allison.

her husband made her a beautiful scented bath… pity it’s outdoors! Inspired by the above picture which was taken by my hubby when we were out walking today AWARDED POTD 3RD SEPTEMBER Please go to my poems page so you can see the accompanying picture as it doesn't show on the POTD page 09-01-17

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/5/2017 6:00:00 PM

Late congrats on potd Jan. Sorry I was kinda out of the loop this past week. But what a lovely picture and poem :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2017 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Akkina I too am busy as I'm on holiday. I can't keep up to date on soup at all:-( hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/4/2017 10:08:00 AM

Love love love it xomo :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2017 12:47:00 PM

Cheers Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/3/2017 6:01:00 PM

Congrats on POTD, Jan. Love the picture.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 6:20:00 PM

Thanks Agnes i will make sure i get a better photo next year when the flowers don't cover her up to much lol:-) She has long blonde hair and her toe nails are painted red:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 9/3/2017 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Jan, brilliant Senryu. :))

Roy Pett
Date: 9/3/2017 5:01:00 PM

Yes I can see the picture and think it's great. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 12:58:00 PM

Thanks Roy... can you see the picture now? hugs jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/3/2017 10:29:00 AM

Hello Jan, Congrats on POTD!! Best Wishes, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:31:00 AM

Many thanks Gary:-) i hope they can get the picture back onto my soup page (it never shows on the POTD screen anyway but it isn't visible at all except when i go in to edit and i can still see it then:-( hugs jan xx

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/3/2017 10:03:00 AM

Still didn't get the picture, but congrats anyway!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:07:00 AM

I can see it on my page when i go to edit the poem but I can't see any pics I have posted on my pages - I see soup are doing updates so I hope the things will return to normal later on as the poem doesn't make much sense without seeing what inspired the poem:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/3/2017 8:32:00 AM

Congrats Jan...well deserved

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:05:00 AM

Cheers Tim:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 9/3/2017 7:46:00 AM

What a wonderful smile you have given me this morning Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:04:00 AM

Thanks James:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2017 5:40:00 AM

Returning with congrats on your POTD--well done Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2017 5:25:00 AM

- Hurray ... Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:45:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise - next time we walk past the house I must give them a copy of the poem and pic:-) hugs jan xx

Lei Strauss

Date: 9/3/2017 4:41:00 AM

This is lovely Jan. Congrats on your POTD

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:05:00 AM

Many thanks Lei i hope you were able to see the picture:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 9/3/2017 3:22:00 AM

potd for two lovely ladies, you Jan, and the one soaking in the lobelia bubbles!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 3:48:00 AM

oh WOW thanks for the great news Lin:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 9/2/2017 8:26:00 PM

Lol!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 2:29:00 AM

I will take a better pic of her next year so folks can see her long blonde hair and red painted toe nails lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alesia Leach

Date: 9/2/2017 7:30:00 PM

Lovely picture and your senryu depicts a wonderful sense of humor to match.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 7:32:00 PM

thanks Alesia

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/2/2017 7:20:00 PM

Oh wow! What an awesome poem. Love the pic and your write Jan!

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/3/2017 9:51:00 PM

Lol! looking forward to it ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 7:32:00 PM

Thanks Susan I will take a picture earlier next year when you can see her blonde hair and painted toenails lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2017 12:00:00 PM

So I gotta come back here and fave THIS one. We were of one mind yesterday!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 3:23:00 PM

aww thanks Andrea I couldn't believe when I read your poem that the images were so similar... and we had our hair done on the same day too lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2017 8:30:00 AM

Ha ha, so funny, inspired artistic ideas, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/2/2017 8:21:00 AM

So funny, now thats one way to hide the body!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 3:24:00 PM

ha ha ha I see an Arthur Vaso classic poem on the horizon lol - if there is anyone underneath her they are having a mud bath lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2017 6:11:00 AM

Such a delightful senryu, Jan...so is the picture! I suggest the owner puts a champagne bottle & glass on the window sill:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 7:33:00 AM

ha ha ha i like that idea Paul. I will take another pic next year as the flowers don't show her feet and painted toenails lol:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/2/2017 4:23:00 AM

I'm back, but only for 2 hrs! I will be on Poetry Soup for those hours this weekend, but starting Monday I have to reserve those hours for school, so Emma will have to get back on for me again after that...she is so sweet! Anyway, I loved this Senryu, it is so beautiful! You have enlightened me by your incredible skill of write this amazing poem! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful piece this morning, thank you for everything you have done for me Jan, I really appreciate it! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 7:32:00 AM

It's just lovely to see you back on soup just don't over do it - di into the soup bowl but not for too long - I have done another blog and there are several messages for you to read:-) just focus on getting well Russell:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/2/2017 12:02:00 AM

Love the tub, great picture, great fun...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2017 3:15:00 AM

thanks charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams

Date: 9/1/2017 5:59:00 PM

I think this poem perfectly depicts the sense of humor of the garden owners! Good one!!.......The pity part depends on if you're bathing or looking, I think! ....80)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2017 6:12:00 PM

My hubby took the pic this morning and I had such fun writing the poem Pat:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2017 5:59:00 PM

hahaha. OH Jan, did you see the poem I posted today. It's so funny we both did a bathing beauty post!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2017 6:08:00 PM

ha ha ha I've just opened the page and seen your poem and pic lol that is such an amazing co-incidence lol mine poem is just a fun poem as hubby took the pic this morning ... I am hearing the music to the twilight zone in my head lol:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/1/2017 5:19:00 PM

Bathing outside I have never tried Because I shrink in the cold Or so I tell

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2017 6:09:00 PM

I'll take another pic of her next year when the flowers are smaller and the whole bath tub is more visible:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/1/2017 5:37:00 PM

Still she looks happy. All the right flowers for a good Shampoo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2017 5:22:00 PM

ha ha ha this one is more like a mud bath:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/1/2017 3:38:00 PM

This photo and sentry remind me of of my wive's green thumb. Imagine taking a summer bath in Florida under several species of orchids not unlike your beautiful photo 'll let you know when I do! Great Write, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2017 3:45:00 PM

I expect to see a picture Ralph of the orchids of course they are my favourite flower lol!!! I intend to take another picture earlier next year when the 'lady' is more visible and you can see her blonde hair and feet peeking up and all the bathing gels by the showerhead. Someone has a great sense of humour to have this display in their garden:-0 hugs jan xx