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A Bandit robbed the pastry shop Now he lies upon his seat He's so stuffed he can't lick his paws Even though he is so neat He has meowed a sad meow Tears trickle behind the mask He would contemplate his navel But seeing it a task He's considering retiring Or change his present trade His mother would support him Oh! don't put on a charade He'll just have to suffer through this Maybe go on a diet Who is kidding whom?_we know He won't even try it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/12/2017 6:12:00 AM
Excellent. Funny but well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:31:00 PM
LOL, had a good chuckle here
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Date: 11/9/2017 11:23:00 PM
LOL - this made me chuckle, (and I so needed a chuckle) ... wonderfully charming, Sara - congrats on your win, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2017 6:35:00 AM
Greg, Wonderful news that you got a laught for they say laughter is the best medicine..It is possible that laugh kept you well ..Sara
Date: 11/9/2017 8:13:00 AM
Well done and funny. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:22:00 AM
Frances, Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you got some humor from the work..Sara
Date: 11/9/2017 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sara. :))
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:36:00 AM
Roy, Thanks for the visit to congratulate me..I appreciate your presence here..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 8:30:00 PM
Cats meow to you too Sara! Congratulations on a meowvalous write!~Che :)
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:36:00 AM
Cheryl, Thanks for the visit to congratulate me..I appreciate you dropping by..Your uplifting comments are encouraging..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 6:13:00 PM
Congrats Sara...loved it....Seren
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:35:00 AM
Seren, Thanks for the visit to my page..Glad that you liked it..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 3:49:00 PM
SO cute and clever, Sara! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:34:00 AM
Janice, I hope the humor made your day. Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara, nicely done... You made me look on the contest list I thought I had not made it ... hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:34:00 AM
Eve, I was delighted to see your name there..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 2:47:00 PM
Very funny. Well done. Congratulations to you too Sara.
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:33:00 AM
Jean, Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you got a laught..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 2:15:00 PM
Once a bandit always a bandit...and a lovely cute one, too!! Congratulations on your top spot, Sara. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:33:00 AM
Paul, Well in humans there is always home for change..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 2:05:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your well deserved first place win--lovely poem!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2017 7:32:00 AM
Vijay, Thanks for the congrats!!! Your presence here is uplifting..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 9:07:00 AM
Giggle :) awesome pen. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:15:00 AM
Maureen, Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Glad that you think it is awesome..Sara
Date: 11/8/2017 6:43:00 AM
I really had a great Meow- ment here! This is very lovely story, Sara. I love your writing style ~cheers ~ ReDFieRy~
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:14:00 AM
Red, Glad that you had a cat's meow reading this one..Thanks for your presence at my page..Sara
Date: 11/5/2017 1:48:00 PM
Lovely story, Sara, enjoyed reading this. // Barry.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2017 3:32:00 PM
Barry, Ahhh!! Thank you for dropping by..Your comments are appreciated...Sara
Date: 11/5/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank God...someone is happy...Loved how you put together the poem... All the best Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2017 12:58:00 PM
Arturo, Thanks for dropping by..I think that cat is stuffed and happy..Sara
Date: 11/5/2017 6:53:00 AM
Very funny Sara. A great poem! :)
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Date: 11/5/2017 7:15:00 AM
Heidi, I hope that you got a chuckle..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 11/5/2017 6:52:00 AM
Great and heart warming write, dear Sara. Bandit and I could do with some support! ;) hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2017 7:14:00 AM
Eileen, Thanks for dropping by..I hope that you got a chuckle at this one..Sara

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