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"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood" Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842 _____________________________________________ How depressing city living can be! Why can't I be brave, pack my things and leave? Rent a small farm and really be me. That summer on the farm I still perceive. The old farmer worked us without pity, so many chores we managed to achieve. Cousin stayed with me, she was so pretty as we began the day gathering hay We were so happy singing a ditty. Eggs needed to be picked in half a day. Soon we were summoned to have a good lunch. After we were allowed to play away. I ran to the garden and got a hunch, gave to my cousin a flowery bunch. 20 November 2020 Placed 1 Terza Rima Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/30/2020 11:36:00 AM
Very sweet and sentimental Victor. Congratulations on the win my friend! Linda
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:58:00 AM
Hi Victor? You shared some good childhood memories. Thank for sharing. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:43:00 AM
Oh how wonderful to work on the farm and enjoy each moment! Congratulations on 1st place!
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Date: 11/29/2020 1:23:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and enchanting poem _Constance
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Date: 11/28/2020 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Victor!! Nice memory and a-lovely poem!
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Date: 11/28/2020 11:18:00 AM
Also I just went and saw that you got FIRST PLACE. WAy to GO!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 11/28/2020 11:17:00 AM
this is SO charming, Victor. I can't believe I never saw it yet! Love this nostalgic rhyme from you.
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Date: 11/22/2020 11:12:00 AM
A very sweet poem my friend and a kind gesture at the end - beautiful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/20/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thank you, Victor for this delightful poem. I think your cousin would remember this time in her life too. Thank goodness for happy memories and the ability to capture them in poetry to share with others..
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Date: 11/20/2020 8:00:00 PM
Quite interesting and pleasant to read this lovely verse, which has such a pleasing rhyme. :)
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Date: 11/20/2020 7:38:00 PM
Sounds like you had a wonderful time, Victor. Pleasant memories are always welcomed :)
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Date: 11/20/2020 12:37:00 PM
Hello Victor, oh these sound like happy times from the past. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 11/20/2020 9:24:00 AM
Ahh!! I think you probably impressed her with your kindness. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/20/2020 6:15:00 AM
Exquisitely joyous reminiscing, Victor. Beautifully ink crafted. Much love and best wishes for the holiday.
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Date: 11/20/2020 5:48:00 AM
Lovely memories Victor, I am opposite of you though, I prefer the city life..
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Date: 11/20/2020 5:31:00 AM
I love this and the quote too! So lighthearted! Bless you, dear man!
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Date: 11/20/2020 5:07:00 AM
Sweet memories--a delightful read, as always, Victor.
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Date: 11/20/2020 4:07:00 AM
Spent half my life in the city, couldn't wait to get out, been in a country town now for 25 years. Im not going back either. Happy memories Victor. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 11/20/2020 3:14:00 AM
- City life is lonely, it's nothing for me - Thank you for sharing good memories in this lovely poem, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2020 1:26:00 AM
Cute one, Victor. My grandfather had a ranch when I was young and I hated going there. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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