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Baby It Is Cold Outside

I can hear the mouthless wind, loudly howling outside my window. Its wingless unseeable form whipping through the leafless trees. Ridding the branches wildly, blowing falling flakes onto every available space, and covering them in whites, giving them admirable shapes. Oh what a magical sight to gaze upon indeed. And although I happily enjoyed watching the snow soundlessly gliding down, kissing the ground softly and forming beautiful landscapes, the harshness wind is toothlessly bitting through my bones with its frigid coldness. So I think it’s time to turn up the fireplace for some heat to my chilled bones, and maybe a cup of delicious hot cocoa to warm my soul. Because baby it is cold outside… Fin Chuuk

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/25/2024 5:56:00 AM

Fin, hoping to touch you whatever reality you’re in, with thanks thru reading your poetry again…

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 5/24/2024 9:40:00 AM

This is a lovely write the ending is filled with warmth

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/9/2024 6:41:00 PM

Still missing you Fin.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/17/2023 6:39:00 PM

Still missing you Fin

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/20/2023 1:47:00 AM

Will always think of you and miss you Fin.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/14/2023 11:13:00 AM

Hello Fin, yes if it is that cold outside it is best to stay inside . But if you were outside warm up with a cup of coca. Your friend , /darlene\

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2023 9:35:00 PM

Fin, this is amazing, you so captured the bitter cold, and painted entire scenes, sounds, and memories for me! Well, winter is passed, enjoy the warmth of the coming months. Thank you so much for your visit to my poem, and your comment. I'm happy to meet you :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/6/2023 9:58:00 PM

Fin, I really enjoyed how the frigid; wintry backdrop is juxtaposed with the warm and inviting elements of the fireplace and the mugs of hot cocoa. Incredibly well done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/6/2023 11:18:00 AM

I love the pleasant contrast between the cold, wintry scene and the coziness of the fire and hot cocoa, Fin. Excellent work. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2023 4:12:00 AM

I like the feelings and emotions captured in this work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/22/2023 1:40:00 AM

The song is one of my favorites. Well composed.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/15/2023 6:47:00 PM

Excellent read! Felt the sting of cold to the bone. Sometimes I get overdone with the desert heat, but when the cooler season comes, after a few weeks I honestly start missing 115 degrees. The old bones don't tolerate cold too well anymore.

Valsa George

Date: 4/14/2023 4:25:00 AM

So sweet a sensation it will be to sit close to the hearth on a winter day and sip a cup of delicious hot cocoa. Well done Fin

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2023 1:23:00 PM

So descriptive and an enjoyable and soothing read.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

I really like this one. I do know how pretty the snow is to watch, yet how cold it gets with the wind. I can relate to your fireplace, with having a woodstove. You have shown the contrast well. I like the comfort you bring forth in the poem :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/11/2023 11:02:00 PM

This is truly beautiful Fin, such beautiful poetry. Well done

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/12/2023 9:54:00 AM

Hi you, thank you :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/11/2023 8:37:00 AM

Love this fin ! You definitely brought me into the frigid beauty and howling frostiness with your words describing the frozen beauty and conditions surrounding you ! I will stay inside and gaze out the window and join you for a cup of hot cocoa by the fire ! Hugs, Susan :)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/12/2023 9:54:00 AM

Susan, thank you so much :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/7/2023 11:31:00 PM

Very cold my dear poet friend Fin and coldness creates such an amazing view. Always dreaming to experience this coldness in my life to watch snow sliding down. Hope someday I will. Thanks you so much for sharing this very wonderful poem. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/9/2023 5:43:00 PM

Len, thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your lovely comment. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/7/2023 5:12:00 PM

i feel the chilling moment, we need warmness, in and out, thanks for the graceful poem

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/7/2023 6:34:00 PM

Yann, thank you so much. Yes we are ready for some warm weather. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/6/2023 2:45:00 PM

I believe I got a chill reading about it. This is a cold poem, Fin. I prefer a more temperate climate Well done:)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/7/2023 6:33:00 PM

Hehehe.. Oh yeah, I am looking forward to summer one thousand percent. ;) Thank you, Danny :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/4/2023 6:57:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Fin - Snow is beautiful to look at when you sit by a fireplace ... April has arrived and it's still cold - Wishing you a nice Easter :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/7/2023 6:31:00 PM

Hello my sunshine friend, you’re so right about snow being beautiful to watch. And I am in the ready for some summer weather. :) Happy Easter friend. Hugs ~ Fin

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/2/2023 8:57:00 PM

Hi Fin, First of all, I must say your title alone grabbed my attention. It reminded me of the song with the same name. When I started to read the poem you didn't disappoint. You have did a fine job describing this cold season. Your last four lines summed up this write very well. Enjoy the rest of your evening:-) Alexis

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/3/2023 2:39:00 PM

Hello Alexis, I’m so happy you enjoyed this one. Made me smile :) Thank you so much dear friend. ~ Fin

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/2/2023 10:53:00 AM

When the mouthless winds blow there’s sure to be snow. Lovely free verse poetry Fin… Belle :)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/3/2023 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Belle. Always nice to hear your thoughts on my poems. I greatly appreciate. :) ~ Fin

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/2/2023 8:07:00 AM

Hello Fin. Your chosen words and placements are very much poetic. The entry in its entirety is poetry. I loved your usage of mouthless and leafless. A very nice poetic touch. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Take Care (smile)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/3/2023 2:37:00 PM

Hello Lisa, it’s always great to read to you comments on my poems. I very much appreciate. Thank you dear friend. Have a great week. :) ~ Fin

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2023 2:54:00 AM

We get cold but no snow here in Malta, Fin, but in spite of that I still enjoy reading poems such as yours. Your end line takes me back in time when Dean Martin had a hit with the same title... Regards // paul

Fin Chuuk
Date: 4/3/2023 2:35:00 PM

Yea, I do have the same one line as him. Not that I want to copy him, it just so happens that it really was cold. Lol. Thank you, Paul.