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Autumn

autumn stalls, a spent leaf falls
spirit yet graced by bliss squalls
rust red hues adorning earth
womb of life, wherefrom God calls

autumnbeautydeathjoyspiritualjueju

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Valsa George

March 14, 2026 at 5:04 AM

Beautifully written dear Seeker friend. I especially liked the first line. Congratulations on your POTD.

Unseeking Seeker

March 14, 2026 at 12:59 PM

Thank you, Valsa dear :)

Ink Empress

March 9, 2026 at 11:23 AM

“ womb of life” how deep is that dear seeker, your words deserve always recognition, cus they have this soul rhythm which makes me forget all and see only light! The way youv used elements of nature to describe cycle of life and more is beyond impressive! Pleasure reading you today! Congratulations! Sending you light always! And ofcourse it is a fave

Unseeking Seeker

March 9, 2026 at 5:15 PM

Thank you, IE dear, happy you continue to post on PS, notwithstanding your other important commitments

Brandy Nicole

March 8, 2026 at 6:56 PM

' womb of life, wherefrom God calls. ' This thought says it all, indeed. Your thoughts hold beauty, grace and tenderness. Congratulations Unseeking, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Unseeking Seeker

March 9, 2026 at 12:03 AM

Delighted you enjoyed this one, Brandy.

Benjamin Bartley

March 8, 2026 at 6:16 PM

Always a joy reading your poetry. Even better as POTD. Congratulations and well deserved.

Unseeking Seeker

March 9, 2026 at 12:03 AM

Thank you, Benjamin

Anne Winter

March 8, 2026 at 5:39 PM

Congratulations on POTD :)

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 5:55 PM

Thanks, Anne :)

Beryl Edmonds

March 8, 2026 at 5:07 PM

Congratulations on having received poem of the day for your lovely Jueju poem… Beryl

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 5:55 PM

Thank you, Beryl :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 8, 2026 at 2:01 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 3:03 PM

Thank you, Kim :)

I Am Anaya

March 8, 2026 at 1:41 PM

Seeker, you've captured the spirit of an autumn death so true, & in one of your favorites the jueju! Congratulations dear poet on POTD!

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 3:02 PM

Thank you, Anaya dear. Yes, the Jueju is one of the rhyming forms I like though this one is tweaked to meet the contest requirement. I was surprised this one made it as a potd

Sam Kauffman

March 8, 2026 at 10:08 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Seeker! There is so much more in your poem than a simple description of autumn in all of its colorful glory! So happy for you. Blissful blessings to you.

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 3:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. It is intriguing why autumn see seems beautiful to us, when what we are looking at is death, in slow motion exhalation.

Gershon Wolf

March 8, 2026 at 9:40 AM

Beautiful and profound, Seeker. Congrats on POTD, gw

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 2:58 PM

Thanks gw ~ :)

Jan Allison

March 8, 2026 at 9:09 AM

After reading your poem I've got the song' those autumn leaves' in my head. many congrats on POTD US:-) hugs Jan x

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 2:57 PM

Thank you, Jan :)

Paula Goldsmith

March 8, 2026 at 8:23 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Autumn" write. What a pretty time of the year. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win...............

Unseeking Seeker

March 8, 2026 at 2:56 PM

Thank you, Paula dear, Autumn reveals beauty in death, does it not?