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peach chiffon sunset
sol sinks to the horizon
wood smoke fills the air

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Karen Croft

Date: 6/21/2024 6:09:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. I can see and smell it

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2024 5:00:00 AM

Congratulations on POTW, Jan!

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/4/2024 1:31:00 AM

Firstly I must apologise for only seeing your POTW now Jan, it really should be highlighted as a stand alone accolade, on the soup’s main page, a beautiful spectacle of sunset you’ve described in just 17 syllables, extraordinary penning, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:40:00 AM

Wow thanks for the boost to my confidence with that comment David!:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Sidwell

Date: 2/3/2024 4:16:00 PM

Lovely, almost dreamy. Congrats on POTW!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:40:00 AM

what a super comment, thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M

Date: 1/30/2024 11:39:00 PM

You're on fire atm Jan and it couldn't happen to a nicer person! Enjoy all your accolades as you deserve them my friend. Congrats on POTW for such a lovely poem….Debx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:40:00 AM

aww thanks Deb its been over a year since I last got POTW:-hugs Jan xx)

Karen Jones

Date: 1/30/2024 6:05:00 PM

Lovely haiku congratulations on potw

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Karen, hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/30/2024 12:56:00 AM

Nice haiku, my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Eve, hugs Jan xx

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/29/2024 10:15:00 AM

As delightful vision as poetry can surprise, JA. Congrats. :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:38:00 AM

more of a surprise its not mentioning poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2024 4:39:00 AM

Jan congratulations on your POTW honors! Your haiku is beautiful!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thanks so much Mike, hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/28/2024 6:28:00 PM

Dear Jan, the stunning imagery of your Haiku captures an Autumn sunset with poetic finesse. Love your last line especially. Congratulations for receiving POTW honors. A worthy choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thanks so much Susan, hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 1/28/2024 5:19:00 PM

Jan, lovely haiku, and a big congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, Constance

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:37:00 AM

thanks Constance i think its the first time I've had the honour in over a year!hugs Jan xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/28/2024 2:40:00 PM

Hello Jan, you captured a beautiful Haiku which is one of my most favorite forms and Autumn which is my most favorite seasons. Congrats for being Poem of the week!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:36:00 AM

thanks so much Daniel, its my favourite season too:-) hugs Jan xx

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/28/2024 1:12:00 PM

Hello sweetie! There’s no stopping you- POTW now. Amazing! Well done and congratulations for a beautiful haiku. This is a delight to read as it’s captivating. Loved it! Keep on going with all these amazing achievements. So pleased for you :) hugs and applause xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2024 9:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Christina, I am working on putting together a piece for a journalist to do an article on my poetry book. sales going great on the island, one man has bought 6 copies! hugs jan xx

Bill Baker

Date: 1/28/2024 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW, Jan. An excellent Haiku poem for us to enjoy. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2024 9:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2024 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write. You told a story in just 3 lines... Have a blessed day writing away with your win....................

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2024 9:28:00 AM

I am so proud of this poem Paula and thrilled I got POTW:-) hugs Jan xx