Aunties Tomato Greenhouse

Aunties Tomato Greenhouse

  Walk up to the greenhouse,
  Step inside the door,
  There's a forest of tomato plants,
  Wander around, have a look and explore.
  Look left, then look right,
  Then at the ceiling to the floor,
  Surrounded by tomato plants,
  There is tomatoes galore!
  How did Aunty grow them?
  Was it with lots of kindness and love?
  And a watering can,
  Like rain from the sky above.
  Or did the fairy godmother (Aunty Phil)
  Wave her magic wand?
  And sprinkle a little magic,
  That made them so big and strong!
  Now step outside the greenhouse,
  Take a tomato or two,
  They are tasty and delicious,
  And also good for you!

 1/8/23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/5/2023 7:11:00 AM
Nothing tastes better than fresh, off the vine tomatoes, especially organic tomatoes. And magic from Aunty Phil, of course. Yum! Delightful and tasty read Jeanette. :)
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Date: 11/1/2023 7:18:00 AM
They smell so great when ripe, don't they? Very cute. Enjoyed this poem.
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 11/3/2023 11:39:00 AM
Yes, fresh grown to are lovely. My Aunty does well growing them. Thank you for your comments. Glad you liked the poem.
Date: 10/6/2023 1:03:00 AM
My tomato plants (grown outside this year) have gone mad and we have been inundated with the things! This made me smile as I intend growing them in our greenhouse next year!
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Date: 10/8/2023 2:58:00 AM
Fresh tomatoes are lovely. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts. Glad you liked the poem.
Date: 10/3/2023 12:47:00 AM
I like this. Great rhyme.
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:12:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/2/2023 9:14:00 AM
A green house full of tomatoes, all for the picking. I was never good with a green thumb Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:13:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed reading this. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 10/2/2023 4:45:00 AM
You brought the greenhouse to the fore with this splendid write, Jeanette. I felt the abundance of tomatoes but also love for your Aunty. Well written!
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:14:00 AM
Yes, she is a lovely lady. Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 9/28/2023 4:34:00 AM
A lovely poem, such sweet memories..
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:15:00 AM
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Date: 9/22/2023 5:21:00 PM
You haven't had a tomato until you've had a Jersey tomato (lol) so red and delicious :) Lovely write, Jeanette! What did the mother tomato say to the baby tomato while walking down the street? Ketchup! Charlie
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Date: 9/26/2023 6:38:00 AM
That's funny. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 9/13/2023 5:29:00 AM
Good Morning Jeanette. This brings back memories of growing up helping my grandfather with the garden of fruits and vegetables which was an entire lot. Your entry is most lovely. Thank you for sharing with us. Take Care (smile)
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:40:00 AM
Yes, my grandad also grew lots of vegetables. It was lovely to go and collect fresh vegetables and to be outdoors. Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 9/8/2023 10:02:00 AM
I had a distant relative who swore that sheep droppings were the secret to tomatoes success. He won many competitions as they were so very sweet, like fruit (which ofcourse they are). Enjoyable poem!
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:36:00 AM
Thank you for your comments. Glad you liked the poem.
Date: 9/6/2023 5:38:00 PM
Lovely Rhyme poetry, Jeanette. I'll have a few please. :-) There is a nice rhythm to your poem. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:35:00 AM
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Date: 9/4/2023 11:14:00 AM
Home grown tomatoes. Nothing to beat it. Eat it like fruit, a wholesome treat. Nicely penned.
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:35:00 AM
Home grown food is tasty. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 9/4/2023 3:27:00 AM
Ahh!! I have thought about how nice it would be to have a small greenhouse so we could have some fresh ones all year long plus a few other things that maybe would grow in there. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:34:00 AM
It is lovely to have homegrown fruit and veg and to be outside in the fresh air. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 9/2/2023 5:30:00 PM
After reading your poem I can say we ate home grown tomatoes today and they are amazing.
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Date: 9/3/2023 2:04:00 AM
Yes, they are delicious when home grown. Thank you for reading my posts.
Date: 8/31/2023 8:25:00 PM
Nicely penned; reminding me of how much I love a home-grown tomato
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:30:00 AM
Yes, home grown tomatoes are lovely. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 8/31/2023 11:18:00 AM
Enjoyed reading. A garden of tomatoes in a greenhouse so lovely. But having tomatoes all year round is enjoyable with your dinners.
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:27:00 AM
Yes tomatoes are lovely all year round. Glad you liked the poem. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 8/31/2023 9:44:00 AM
Tomatoes are fabulous, just to walk into a tomato forest, such a sight to see. A chefs paradise, red ripe, fresh and juicy tomatoes! Delightful poetry, how lucky you are, to have aunti Phil, Jeanette! ~Anaya
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:27:00 AM
Yes, Aunty Phil is a lovely lady. Fresh tomatoes are delicious. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 8/29/2023 1:04:00 AM
Just wonderful. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:25:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 8/22/2023 2:13:00 AM
Ahh, I love everything about this piece, from the imagery to rhymes and whimsical storytelling.. Wow! Such a resplendent piece and hued my heart with tomato red flavours! Delightful and magical... :)
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:24:00 AM
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Date: 8/20/2023 2:15:00 PM
Nice rhyming and I know for myself many go bad on the vine.
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Date: 8/21/2023 11:14:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. My Aunty has done well with the plants.
Date: 8/13/2023 2:50:00 PM
sweet and nostalgic this is.
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Date: 8/21/2023 11:14:00 PM
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Date: 8/11/2023 12:52:00 AM
Lovely poem about growing fresh tomatoes, Jeanette, homegrown tomatoes are far better than any other:) you have a wonderful aunt:)
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Date: 8/21/2023 11:15:00 PM
Yes my Aunty is wonderful!! And fresh grown tomatoes are lovely. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 8/10/2023 7:46:00 AM
Isn’t it a warm feeling to see beautiful plants? Your aunt have the magic thump. :)
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 8/11/2023 12:01:00 AM
Yes, she definitely has the magic touch. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 8/9/2023 7:23:00 PM
Visiting a vegetable guarden where vegetables grow healthy and profuse is a delightful experience. Your auntie, I am sure, has a magic thumb ! Beautiful poem dear Jeanette !
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Date: 8/11/2023 12:03:00 AM
Yes, it is lovely to see fresh grown vegetables. My Aunty is very good at growing Veg and plants. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 8/9/2023 6:59:00 AM
Delightful~~nostalgia at its best, Jeanette! Janice
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Date: 8/11/2023 12:03:00 AM
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