At the Pawn Shop

She stretched her tiny arms up high.
There it sat on a dusty shelf.
Looking around she let out a sigh
wishing she could reach it herself.

A lovely lady of porcelain and lace
in a gingham dress with smoky brown eyes.
She was looking pretty from her lofty place
and the small girl knew it was just her size!

In this little shop of barter and loan
wishes were many yet she just had one.
That this dolly would be her own.
She just knew they'd have such fun!

Her mama came and let out a smile;
scooped the doll down for her little girl
dug around in her purse a short while
as her daughter did an ecstatic twirl!



for contest"At The Pawn Shop"
written 6/19/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:40 AM
Congrats on your winning poem. Nicely done
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 6:42 AM
Deb an uplifting scene written for 'At The Pawn Shop'. A much deserve win, congrats. Warm Smiles, Connie
A  Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 12:47 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Nice little mama and daughter story of love. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
Pettit Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your win. Reading this reminded me of a woman I almost married years ago. She was an avid doll collector.
A   Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Deb, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Wish you congratulation on your win, loved always, bl
Gregory Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 7:38 PM
I loved this....brought back a memory or two. Z
Richards Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:51 PM
I can picture it all.........like a Norman Rockwell painting!! Loved it!!
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:37 AM
- A very sweet poem, Deb. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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